John Lawless Poet Verse

Pic Motifs - Visual 3

His world
hangs on a wall.
His wheeled chair
sits in a corner.
His tillered escape –
the Barque,
Astral Traveler.

//20 words//


©11/17/2017

submitted to – PIC MOTIFS – poetry Contest

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Gabby Sabre November 18, 2017 at 2:23 PM Non-conventional rendition of the theme; very interesting. The word count though should be 25-30 words, I think. Better check, sir. Best of luck!

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2017 at 12:04 PM wow, that takes imagination to tell the story that goes with this picture. I could not think of a word to say for that image, but you did it in a way that made it so interesting.

Constance La France November 17, 2017 at 2:05 PM John, this is terrific for the contest, love have you visualized that visual, I looked at it and said to self, no way !