Pic Motifs Visual 2

My boyfriend is
smoking hot.
I kid you not.
Under that hood
I understood
lay my destiny.
In the dark I 
felt the spark
as we passed.
Love to last.

18/11/2017
30 words, 137 characters.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Smoking hot...I love it Jean! Congratulations on your win! : )
Murray Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 3:14 AM
Somebody throw some water on that chap!!
La France Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Jean, I like your take on the visual and congratulations on your win in the contest !
Murray Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 5:18 PM
Thank you Constance.
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 12:06 AM
How fun that you went off the "smoking hot" of the picture. Great idea to run with , Jean. Big congrats in the contest
Murray Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 4:29 AM
Good morning Andrea and thank you. I can't help myself. I always run with the first thing that comes into my mind.
Onclaud Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 3:49 PM
ohh, jean...this playful though deep poem enticed me...sweet congrats and thanks for your splendid entry!
Murray Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Thank you for the placement Nette.
Roper Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 3:16 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win :)
Murray Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 3:21 PM
You're so nice Eve. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 12:26 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I seem to manage by the skin of my teeth. I always know to start at the bottom of the winning list. I still consider myself to be fortunate to be on the list in the first place of course. God loves a trier they say.
Flats Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 9:22 AM
I can't see the picture, but I get the picture! Then again, it could have been Danica Patrick talking about her latest race car... jus say'n;-) Hugs 'n spark plugs! ~ john
Flats Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:25 AM
:-)
Murray Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 9:40 AM
Is there a difference?
Daniel Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Wow! A truly unique take on the picture, Jean, only you could have come up with him as your boyfriend, ha ha:) all the best:)
Murray Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 8:39 AM
You know me well now Jo. Me and my one track mind.
Downing  Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Feeling hot hot hot... Lol! Fantabulous poem Jean! Good luck in the contest... hugs and smiles :)
Murray Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Thank you Akkina. Once I saw the smoke there was no other way to go.....other than him being a heavy smoker I guess.
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:32 AM
A very hot depiction!!
Murray Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:44 AM
He's too hot to handle sometimes Vijay.
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 6:52 AM
- Ha, ha ... I recognize that picture :) - Well done, Jean - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Good afternoon Sunshine. Thank you as always.
Vaso Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 9:49 PM
oh la la hot hot hot!!! :)
Murray Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 4:34 AM
(Whisper) Don't tell Tim but that's you under there.xx
Roper Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Great write, Jean, luck in the contest Hugs Eve ~`*
Roper Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 12:33 PM
:)
Murray Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 4:33 AM
Thank you Eve. I hope it's up to par now.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 7:41 PM
An interesting write! GL in contest!
Murray Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 4:33 AM
Did you see him Kim? I can't get the thingie to transfer to this.
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