Juaneco Torrente Poet Verse

Pic Motifs- Visual 2

It’s not hooded evenings
Which leaves me desperate
     But the alienation from self-esteem -

     And no one can trace such loathing
For veil of blindness rips induced apathy.


nette oncluad--Pic Motifs Contest 
Nov 15,2017   ( 28 words)

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Connie Marcum Wong November 21, 2017 at 9:46 PM This poem delves into the inner dark chambers of the mind Juaneco. Congratulations on your win with this creative piece! : )

Constance La France November 21, 2017 at 4:57 PM Juaneco, oh so deep and dark. Congratulations on your win in the contest !

Andrea Dietrich November 21, 2017 at 12:05 AM very deep thinking imagery in this one! Congrats.

Eve Roper November 21, 2017 at 12:04 AM Juaneco , congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2017 at 3:44 PM a different track for this topic well relayed especially the last line, juaneco... congrats lots and thanks!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2017 at 12:27 PM - Such a great imagery Juaneco, congratulations on your win :) -// S.S. :)