Russell Sivey Poet Verse

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Pic Motifs - Visual 1

The Night Lamp

As night stumbles in
The lamp crinkles on
And the evening rides
The light - 
Which upon
The lamp’s tenderness
And glory encapsulates
Its harmony within…

It escapes the night

17 November 2017
Pic Motifs Contest, Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
29 words

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Connie Marcum Wong November 21, 2017 at 8:14 PM Congratulations on your win with your unique entry Russell. : )

Constance La France November 21, 2017 at 4:50 PM Russell, I like what where you took the theme and congratulations on your win in the contest !

Eve Roper November 20, 2017 at 11:58 PM Russell, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2017 at 11:58 PM Congrats to you , Russell!

Joseph May November 20, 2017 at 4:23 PM Congrats on your win Russell

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2017 at 3:05 PM ohh, you shine in the darkness; what a lustrous work, russell.. sending my congrats and thanking you for participating!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2017 at 12:34 PM - Congratulations on your win, Russell :)

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2017 at 7:48 PM This is really nicely done, Russell. That picture did not inspire me but I like where you took your poem with that picture.

Constance La France November 17, 2017 at 1:47 PM Russell, nicely done for that visual, very dreamy and wonderful, best of luck in the contest ~

Richard Lamoureux November 17, 2017 at 12:56 PM A tremendous pairing off visual and words Russell. Good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier November 17, 2017 at 10:03 AM Well done, Russell. Good luck with the contest.

Heidi Sands November 17, 2017 at 9:30 AM Excellent Russell. You have written this so well to go with that photo for the contest! I love the ending too.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2017 at 6:53 AM - A beautiful harmony, Russell - Best wishes in the contest and for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit November 17, 2017 at 6:12 AM Well done Russell--you depicted the images well in your lovely poem--best for a win!

Silent One November 17, 2017 at 6:05 AM Great imagery Russell, you have written a great poem using that image.. Good luck in the contest..