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Pic Motifs: Visual 1

An Enchanted Lamp-post Neither the serenade of crickets nor the waltz of moths could appease her enough. Secluded in a glass castle her glowing beauty flickers, unaware of the blazing beast trapped within. Date: 11/16/2017 Note: For the contest (Pic Motifs) by Nette Onclaud. *Placed Fourth*

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2018 8:31:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one again. How have you been?

Afzal Nusker
Date: 3/9/2018 9:54:00 AM

Thanks Richard for asking. I'm fine, just been busy but I do miss reading all you Soupers. I'll be back soon hopefully.

John Fleming

Date: 1/1/2018 7:30:00 AM

Hello, Afzal...not heard from you in a while. Hope your Christmas was a peaceful and joyous one? Please allow me to wish you all the very best for the New Year. My warmest regards as ever. :) john

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/2/2018 3:25:00 AM

Thank yo very much, John. I know I haven't visited you for a while. I'm going to do it right now, Dear Friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/7/2017 8:58:00 AM

I can see why this one won’t. Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2018 7:08:00 PM

I meant to say I can see why this one won. Congrats again.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/2/2018 3:23:00 AM

Thanks, Richard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2017 9:40:00 PM

Hi, Afzal. I am in a rush tonight and don't see new poems from you. Let me know when you have one up, ok?

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/2/2018 3:23:00 AM

Surely I will when I do, Dear Andrea.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/25/2017 7:58:00 AM

Congrats on your high placing in the contest Afzal - well deserved...Maria

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/2/2018 3:22:00 AM

Thank you, Maria.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/21/2017 9:40:00 PM

I love your unique entry Afzal! Congratulations on your win! : )

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/2/2018 3:22:00 AM

Thank you, Connie.

Constance La France

Date: 11/21/2017 4:57:00 PM

Afzal, a splendid and wonderful write. Congratulations on your win in the contest!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/2/2018 3:21:00 AM

Thanks a lot, B.W.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/21/2017 6:44:00 AM

Am not surprised you won with this beauty, Afzal, great imagination:) my heartfelt congratulations:)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/2/2018 3:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jo.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/21/2017 12:03:00 AM

Afzal, love your imagery congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/21/2017 5:10:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2017 12:02:00 AM

This was one of my favorites, Afzal. Glad to see it on the winners' list!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/21/2017 5:08:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea.

Joseph May

Date: 11/20/2017 4:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win Afzal

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/20/2017 9:36:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2017 3:38:00 PM

afzal, stirring work that spells mystery!.. finest congrats and thanks for joining!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/20/2017 9:37:00 PM

Thank you very much, Nette.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2017 12:28:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win ! :) -

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/20/2017 9:37:00 PM

Thank you, Anne.

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2017 7:21:00 PM

Very well done Afzal...

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/19/2017 3:54:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2017 12:35:00 AM

You used your imagination on this one and made more of the picture,Afzal. Very nice.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/19/2017 3:55:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I hope Nette likes it too.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/17/2017 8:42:00 PM

Well done Afzal. An interesting word picture concept. All the best in the contest...Maria

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/19/2017 3:55:00 AM

Thank you, Maria.

Silent One

Date: 11/17/2017 8:04:00 AM

You did this very well, some great words used.. Good luck in the contests..

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/19/2017 3:55:00 AM

Thank you, S.O.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2017 7:01:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Afzal :) - Best wishes in the contest and for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/19/2017 3:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne. Huggs & Regards :~)