Constance La France Poet Verse

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Pic Motifs - Visual 1

She stands under a gas lit lantern-

             in the

                           f
                             a
                               l
                                 l
                                   i
                                     n
                                        g

                                                  rain
                                                        .
                                                           .
                                                              . 
she is so  W E A R Y - 
 
                      a car stops 
            and silently she gets in-
                             she will give her body
to survive-

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November 16, 2017

Poetry/Verse/Pic Motif
Copyright Protected, ID 17- 9617-98-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.
                                                               

Written for the contest, Pic Motifs
sponsor, Nette Onclaud

Visual #1 Word Count - 30

Second Place

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Paul Callus November 22, 2017 at 5:51 PM How very creative this is, Constance, both in content and presentation. I can feel her sad weary mood of resignation. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong November 21, 2017 at 8:09 PM This was a stunner Constance! Congratulations on your most deserving second placement! : )

Eve Roper November 20, 2017 at 11:57 PM Broken Wings, I love the last stanza, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2017 at 11:56 PM wow, you really thought outside the box with this idea, Constance. I LOVE this one. Congrats on your very well deserved win.

Afzal Nusker November 20, 2017 at 9:48 PM As usual, poignantly out of the box. Congrats on your win with this brilliant work.

Joseph May November 20, 2017 at 4:31 PM A creative take on the visual..Congrats on your win BW

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2017 at 2:57 PM thank you for this spellbinding piece, constance... love the poetic mood and language..happy congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2017 at 12:36 PM - Congratulations on your win, B.W. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2017 at 6:56 AM - A lovely and touching writing, B.W. :) - Best wishes in the contest and for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey November 17, 2017 at 4:09 AM Beautifully rendered write my friend, I loved the intriguing way you have written a peaceful poem here this morning! What a fabulous poem, such a tender piece, glorious in all aspects, Nette will like this write I just know it! Great Work!!