Pic Motifs Visual 1

like diamante globules flickering,
 glimpses reflect various moods
    as  irises brighten crystalline night

I become delirious in her glow 

where aura of lantern- eyes.
   dim street poles in shame.



Entry for Pic Motifs Contest—nette onclaud
17th Nov 2017   word count  29
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Wow Banjo, I really like the way you have expressed this poem with mystery. Last two lines are magnificent! Congratulations on your win! : )
La France Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 4:55 PM
Banjo, you have penned a beauty. Congratulations on your win in the contest !
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 12:04 AM
Splendid imagery ,Banjo. Congrats for your win.
Roper Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 12:04 AM
Banjo, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
Onclaud Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 3:41 PM
love the analogy between light and eyes, banjo; such a splendid poem ... congrats on your award and thanks for sharing!
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 12:27 PM
- Congratulations on your win ! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 7:04 AM
- A lovely poem, Banjo - Best wishes in the contest and for a wonderful weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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