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Pianos Tunes

My fingers played the piano running over ivory keys. =========================================== Tickling the ivory keys plays tribute to the elephant. ============================================= Flowing softly in free motion unfolds a magical melody. Please use second one for contest. if you want it submitted alone let me know. P

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James Foulk

Date: 5/18/2011 11:59:00 AM

very creative piece, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Grinnell Remembered.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/8/2011 7:21:00 PM

All these are fine crystalline entries. Congratulations on winning with this entry.

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 10:41:00 AM

Congratulations Phyllis on your success inb the contest. Agape, Moses

Date: 1/22/2011 12:08:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery and creative format! Congratulations on your contest win. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 1/21/2011 3:24:00 AM

unfolds a magical melody like a melody which your son is. a melody maker.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Phyliss in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2011 1:01:00 PM

Congratulationson your HM in Rick's Contest, Phyl. Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2011 2:42:00 PM

Congratulations ..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 1/11/2011 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations Phyllis on your HM win with this beautiful Crystalline-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/11/2011 9:21:00 AM

Congratulations on this HM win in the contest, Phyllis

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/11/2011 4:31:00 AM

Congrats, my favourite is number 3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 10:08:00 PM

Congratultions, Phyllis. They were sweet all of them. LUv, Andrea

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/10/2011 8:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Charles

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/10/2011 5:36:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Phyllis, I also wrote one with several crystallines then had to pick one

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 5:12:00 PM

Congrats Phyllis on your HM in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy your very special honor tonight with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 5:09:00 PM

Phyllis, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 4:35:00 PM

thankxx Phyllis for all your wonderful warm and always welcome comments on my poetry my friend.. appreciate so very much with luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2011 11:49:00 AM

I enjoyed you set of Crystalline Phyllis.. beautiful and good luck for the contest :) WN

Allen Hackett

Date: 1/10/2011 11:36:00 AM

Sweet, it flows like Jazz.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2011 2:31:00 PM

I should have done like you and told him "choose second one" too. But I went and put it on a new entry. I think you were fine to do this way, Phyllis.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2011 2:16:00 PM

Cute one..Good luck in the contest..Sara

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/8/2011 12:25:00 PM

ivory keys tribute to the elephant. i think not. john

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2011 11:14:00 PM

Very nice work on all three crystallines, Phyllis. The second one is my favorite! Hope you enter it in the contest because it will surely be a winner. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/7/2011 6:21:00 PM

well written work. enjoyed reading today!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/7/2011 5:06:00 PM

Wonderful words describing the unique qualities of the lovely piano and it's musical ability.. good luck in the contest my friend.. luv the tickling ivory keys lines... well my Nonet turned into a Rispetto for Dr. Ram's current contest so I removed some lines and wrote it as the contest entry..thankxx for your good wishes..luv.. happy weekend...