Phyllis Babcock Poet Crystalline

Pianos Tunes

My fingers played the piano

                                     running over ivory keys.


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Tickling the ivory keys
                    
                              plays tribute to the elephant.
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Flowing softly in free motion
                                  
                                      unfolds a magical melody.




Please use second one for contest. if you want it submitted alone let me know. P

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James Foulk May 18, 2011 at 11:59 AM very creative piece, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Grinnell Remembered.

Robert Pettit February 8, 2011 at 7:21 PM All these are fine crystalline entries. Congratulations on winning with this entry.

John Freeman January 24, 2011 at 10:41 AM Congratulations Phyllis on your success inb the contest. Agape, Moses

January 22, 2011 at 12:08 PM Wonderful use of imagery and creative format! Congratulations on your contest win. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Charles Melody Lightning Ink January 21, 2011 at 3:24 AM unfolds a magical melody like a melody which your son is. a melody maker.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 14, 2011 at 10:07 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Phyliss in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol

Audrey Haick January 12, 2011 at 1:01 PM Congratulationson your HM in Rick's Contest, Phyl. Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick January 11, 2011 at 2:42 PM Congratulations ..Sara

Kash Poet January 11, 2011 at 10:07 AM Congratulations Phyllis on your HM win with this beautiful Crystalline-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta January 11, 2011 at 9:21 AM Congratulations on this HM win in the contest, Phyllis

Nick Bagnall January 11, 2011 at 4:31 AM Congrats, my favourite is number 3

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2011 at 10:08 PM Congratultions, Phyllis. They were sweet all of them. LUv, Andrea

Charles Henderson January 10, 2011 at 8:55 PM Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Charles

Francine Roberts January 10, 2011 at 5:36 PM congrats on your win in the contest Phyllis, I also wrote one with several crystallines then had to pick one

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 10, 2011 at 5:12 PM Congrats Phyllis on your HM in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy your very special honor tonight with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire January 10, 2011 at 5:09 PM Phyllis, Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 10, 2011 at 4:35 PM thankxx Phyllis for all your wonderful warm and always welcome comments on my poetry my friend.. appreciate so very much with luv..

Wilma Neels January 10, 2011 at 11:49 AM I enjoyed you set of Crystalline Phyllis.. beautiful and good luck for the contest :) WN

Allen Hackett January 10, 2011 at 11:36 AM Sweet, it flows like Jazz.

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2011 at 2:31 PM I should have done like you and told him "choose second one" too. But I went and put it on a new entry. I think you were fine to do this way, Phyllis.

Sara Kendrick January 8, 2011 at 2:16 PM Cute one..Good luck in the contest..Sara

John Loving Iii January 8, 2011 at 12:25 PM ivory keys tribute to the elephant. i think not. john

Carolyn Devonshire January 7, 2011 at 11:14 PM Very nice work on all three crystallines, Phyllis. The second one is my favorite! Hope you enter it in the contest because it will surely be a winner. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse January 7, 2011 at 6:21 PM well written work. enjoyed reading today!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 7, 2011 at 5:06 PM Wonderful words describing the unique qualities of the lovely piano and it's musical ability.. good luck in the contest my friend.. luv the tickling ivory keys lines... well my Nonet turned into a Rispetto for Dr. Ram's current contest so I removed some lines and wrote it as the contest entry..thankxx for your good wishes..luv.. happy weekend...

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