Pianos Are Falling Apart

Pianos are falling apart, The ivory keys at the start; From there to the panel, It’s too much to handle; It’s breaking the strings of my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 9, 2011 at 3:38 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Brenden. Love Carol
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February 18, 2011 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Brenden. Love, Carol
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February 18, 2011 at 11:27 AM
Interesting use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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June 26, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Wonderful humor-old pianos never die!~Tirzah~
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June 26, 2010 at 10:30 AM
Hey, this is an excellent write. I like the humor in the piece. It's also very refreshing and flows with some reality. Great job! Joseph
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June 26, 2010 at 10:01 AM
Great limerick! Very clever how you went from the percussion of the keyboard to the "strings" of your heart, Brenden. Don't let this old piano fall apart. Such antiques are priceless and worth the investment in maintenance. My late aunt had one that she "let go," but I wish it were still in the family. Very nicely done! Love, Carolyn
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