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Physical Freak

We have a standing date, today and everyday when dawn breaks a smile. We meet in the park we begin to move, acquainting ourselves we begin to sheen. Our blood is pulsing feeling so g o o d! Faster and faster, we become more intense sustaining as long as we can, until we are spent. Dripping wet, a tousled mess panting we slowly recover. My obsession is requited for now... tomorrow, I must have you again. I can't live without you I love you, I want you, ..my daily workout. Susan Ashley July 22, 2017

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 12/19/2018 3:20:00 PM

Fantastic Poem! I've never read a more sensual poem with a surprise ending! You had us all hooked from the beginning. Well done. I had a similar relationship with exercise unfortunately we broke up....

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/19/2018 4:07:00 PM

Lol! I’m sorry to hear of your breakup with exercise.. :)) That you enjoyed my poem and got caught up in its spirit pleases me immensely, Timothy. Thank you for your heartwarming response to my write. Your gracious visit and kindness is truly appreciated my friend. Warmest holiday wishes to you and yours.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2017 9:59:00 AM

Your intense passionate workouts must keep you in great form, Susan! Thoroughly enjoyed this 'physical' offering and the slant you gave it. ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/15/2017 4:07:00 PM

Yes, I had fun with this write Paul. My workouts don't include runs in the park at dawn, I prefer a mid-morning session when time allows. Your wonderful enjoyment of my poem delights me and I thank you for your lovely comments. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2017 12:51:00 AM

I was tricked in the end lol

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/26/2017 7:34:00 PM

Ha ha! Glad I got ya! Thank you Michael for visiting another older poem. I really appreciate your visit, comment and the chance to trick you! lol! Susan

Corwin Donovan

Date: 8/6/2017 10:49:00 PM

I love how open this is and how its so unabashed. Terrific intensity too. :) I always enjoy reading your poetry Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/26/2017 7:31:00 PM

Thank you so very much Corwin and I apologize for the late response.., I never knew that your comment was here on this poem... Sorry my friend... but I appreciate your kind comment and visit. Hope all is well with you! :) Susan

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/22/2017 6:38:00 AM

;)

Susan Ashley
Date: 7/22/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thank you for the wink and the read Maureen :)