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Photostory Number One

Photostory Number One cosseted, between his sister and brother, the infant’s eyes idolize their playfulness ~ his sibling’s hands in flight, peacefully glide, swooshing in mid air ~ warmly entertaining. the arching wings over him, remind his mind of cherubim. a jewel, treasured in his family nest. blessed trove of happiness. duly, the twins have attached him to their hips as well. they adore his coos and joyful twitching of his little frame. the heavenly trio in the shape of a mother’s arms ~ entrusted to Eden. 11/14/2017 Photostory #1

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Date: 11/14/2017 1:40:00 PM
Ahh!! Haven't seen the photo but the poem describes a very charming scene..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2017 1:44:00 PM
And thank you for your nice comment 3
Date: 11/14/2017 1:07:00 PM
Beautifully painted portrait of words, Kim. You deft pen creates snapshot images of love and grace administered w/pure innocence. A joyous, loving poem. Aurora sparkling bright write. Love and joy always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2017 1:09:00 PM
Blessings, Freddie <3 Thank you...Kim
Date: 11/14/2017 11:11:00 AM
Sweet and lovely. All the best in the contest and everything else ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2017 1:08:00 PM
Blessing to you, dear CayCay!
Date: 11/14/2017 9:36:00 AM
You captured the story well in this moving poem--best for a win, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank Vijay :)

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