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Photon of Light

A photon of light enters this dented room Screaming past my phase of a seared existence Light escaped through the cracks of imperil doom Shelled by the dull pounding of acquiescence Opening the door to times external glow Beams of light digress extremes that are below Life increases with virtuous tender flash Expressionless blinds my every fabric sash
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/18/2013 4:30:00 PM
powerful write indeed, Russell
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Date: 12/17/2013 1:54:00 PM
This is just blindingly good. I so admire the daring and drive it takes to attempt.
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Date: 12/17/2013 1:39:00 PM
Insightful and spiritual! It makes the soul glow with anticipation! Great work my friend Russell!
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Date: 12/17/2013 9:13:00 AM
Excellent energy in this writing! I kept thinking of the movie, Tron, for some reason. Wicked job!
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Date: 12/17/2013 7:15:00 AM
beaming words light this page, russell... very interesting, illustruous write.. huggs
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Date: 12/17/2013 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful thought, Life increases with virtuous tender flash, Russell,
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