Phosphorus

sunny
bay by day,
by night a show-
the luminal aqua
aglow


Luminous Lagoon -Jamaica
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Owens Avatar
November 8, 2009 at 8:12 PM
Wow...nice...enjoyed...Marty
Delacroix Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 9:09 AM
Awesome! Only a few words, yet grand scenery. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 7:43 AM
Sounds like a lovely picture or a great place. Keep writing and informing us of things and places around us. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 6:25 AM
simple, elegant, lovely! Light & Love
Townsend Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 12:57 AM
Sounds so wonderful. Exquisite writing... "the luminal aqua" great line! Thank you for your comments. Smiles from Lolita
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