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Phosphorescent Hair

So excited, I was to be going to dance at Purdue U... And on a blind date, too! Aunt Angie mixed her magic hair potion, To turn me into a blond bombshell. Well, at least...that was her notion. Tragically for me, my tresses turned  out to be chartreuse green! I wept till there were no tears left. Then on to the train, to meet my fate- date. I saw my date when the train arrived,  And pulled slowly into the station.. His face turned pale white You would, too, if your date looked like a ghoul, from the Woodstock Nation. No winner was he to me, either! A short nerdy type complete  with those nerd-glasses,too! I clearly saw my destiny, I foresaw he would not go to the dance with me. As right as rain, the nerd-fool called later, so overcome with a cold was he. That at the dance, he could not be. I sat forlorn with tree green hair! Utterly forlorn and sad in Purdue's Student Union! A PH.D, as astronomer, who, like a  Knight in shining armor, came to my  heart-broken need! Takes one interested in the stars and God's firmament To envision this lost poetic soul at sea. The dance was magnificent as was my Savior Prince. The compounds and the elements of our universe, aligned! And created the most celestial night ever.            ~ a true story~ 5/10/2019 11:00 am PST

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Date: 5/12/2019 2:10:00 PM
This story is glowing. You just can't make this stuff up, eh?! Liked the happy ending, too. (A good one for St. Patrick's Day. LOL). Nicely narrated, Panagiota. ~ gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/12/2019 2:23:00 PM
The second date was awesome. I was only a freshman at Loyola U, north campus at the time. He was more mature and also brilliant and obviously compassionate with a great sense of humor,,, Thank you,,panagiota
Date: 5/11/2019 9:40:00 PM
What an awesome love story!!!! I could see this in a movie!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/11/2019 9:48:00 PM
LOL...thanks for being the first responder to this!! It could be a movie, it was innocent and funny although I was horrified at the time. Happy Mothers Day Panagiota

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