Phoenix - Tanka

rising from my heart,
bathing in my soul's ashes,
proud of my fire...
i'm burning words with my thought,
forging new-born cries of hope...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gordon Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 6:48 PM
mmm i remember that feeling, the phoenix to the fire,looks like someone ran with it
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June 9, 2010 at 9:24 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Liliana. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 8:39 PM
A wonderful thought with apt images, Liliana
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