Phoenix Resiliency

Written: January 28, 2024
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Under a shivery midday embrace
In a shade of algid sun's rays
a hung flamboyant, peacock flower
leaving the air agape
with their genius hues
bead petals shimmered 
as gemstones lead the way 
to nature's sublime dream
a soft breeze blew across trees
nurturing comfort of time
beneath a sparkling, lovelorn sky

With fortitude fetching flute tune
echoes through the valley
It signals cease of a journey
Its courteous aromas fit lovers
warmth rekindles dead twigs
nature's oasis is 
vibrant and fragrant
vibrancy, stimulation
a gentle breeze carries
an intoxicating scent of flowers
enhancing sensory experience

Flames fiercely flare flowers
speckled sheen starkly studs
rosemary-blue butterfly 
swirls in the air
as the Phoenix's skyline 
dispels all gloom
a powerful song fills 
the hallowed halls.
dreams and wishes 
echo resoundingly.
Phoenix's tale of renewal 
bravery and grace 
is a story of vying
ashes deeming success
with poise zest 
It's time for fresh 
fieriness to flourish
and nothing can stop it

Winter doldrums are nearly over 
restore obliterating radiance
bleak black charcoal 
awakening an upward world
a kaleidoscope of colors 
and a loud choir
utterly unique and dazzling light 
ornamentals adorned stars 
soaring high, aiming at the sky
Phoenix flight reminiscence
to achieve solace and delight
we glimpse ourselves in it.

3rd place contest winner

analogyappreciationhopespiritualfree verse

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Anisha Dutta

January 30, 2024 at 9:04 AM

So rhythmic , so well composed on gorgeous presentation, it is above any admiration. Simply I am whelmed. Have Good Days.

Mystic Rose Rose

January 30, 2024 at 4:38 AM

Your poetry is always brilliant and most colorful. I enjoyed dipping in your talented write today, congrats Sotto

Ink Empress

January 29, 2024 at 11:11 AM

Such brilliant metaphors and creative adjectives and flow of word weaving throughout this dr sotto! Your way of delivering things is truly captivating and intriguing! Theres always a philosophical touch in your words and the wisdom that emanates through your lines leaves readers in awe! I love how youve written especially “ rosemary-blue butterfly swirls in the air as the Phoenix's skyline dispels all gloom“ wow! How artistic and enchanting! And i love the alliterations too! Impeccable write

Howard Kerr

January 29, 2024 at 10:56 AM

I am engrossed in this exhilarating epic from a multitude of perspectives. Your obvious giftedness in the area of visual portraits, the creation of plausible narratives, and of course the optimistic strain rounding off this stunning masterpiece. I’m quite touched by your favourable and very incisive review of “Magenta etc” Sotto. Your reflections are a spur to further endeavours. Howard

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2024 at 7:12 AM

Great that winter is nearly over, and signs of spring are returning on the scene even though we know it is still going to be awhile when the heart of spring awakens our hearts. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

January 29, 2024 at 5:50 AM

A delightful poem, my friend. --a gentle breeze carries an intoxicating scent of flowers enhancing sensory experience-- I like the sense of joy you convey.