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Phenomenal Women

Praying in her back room Her eyes focused on her Father Even when downtrodden Never giving up On her family, Making it her mission to Embrace love and the ability to Nestle their desires Absentmindedly she forgets her own significance, while Love and trust is all she Wish for, to Open the doors to her heart, she Magically succeeds to keep Everybody happy, Never forgetting, that to get love you need to give love…

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2010 11:29:00 PM

VERY nice these pheomenal women, Wilma. And how nice you are an earth sign.I get along well with earth!! Luv, Andrea

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/14/2010 4:31:00 AM

Hey Wilma, Hoop jy kan ontspan en hierdie naweek sal jou naweek geniet! This must be you in this Acrostic!...Really a great write and very affectionate! Enjoyed reading it this rainy afternoon! En dankie vir jou mooi kommentaar! Take care and all the best!...Gert:)

Skat A

Date: 8/13/2010 7:09:00 PM

WILMA, I have read many of your poems when i have the chance. I have to hand it 2 U girl. U R a very powerful writer and women. Loved the whole concept of your pOem*luv~SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2010 2:20:00 PM

Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Anthony Beesley

Date: 8/13/2010 1:54:00 PM

she's better than i am...i write people off in a flash,including family

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2010 10:34:00 AM

Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Wilma. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/13/2010 9:28:00 AM

I wonder if everyone realizes the insight provided in your last line. Indeed, we cannot expect to receive love unless we give love. There are too many who become discouraged and close the doors to their hearts. Very wise words, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/13/2010 6:42:00 AM

Amazing write Wilma with a power punch for a last line my friend.. so true .. so true.. enjoyed this wonderful Acrostic ..if for the contest..good luck.. enjoyed .. happy weekend..with luv..