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Phases of Life

As small children we are wide eyed and innocent, toddle after Mommy like baby elephants, go to school to learn with our writing implement, our parents hoping that we don't act indolent, As teens upon graduation were confident, some acting wild while others are reticent, finding our jobs and falling in love relevant, some marry while others act more dissident, When we get old hopefully were still intimate, thinking back on our lives with heartfelt sentiment, being nice with people till death is imminent, eulogy at funeral will be evidence. 1-11-17

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Date: 2/7/2017 8:19:00 PM
Really love this Cheryl !! True & true !!xoxo
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/8/2017 7:45:00 AM
Thank you so much for kind comment & visit Jeanie!~Che xoxo
Date: 1/28/2017 8:08:00 PM
AHH a walk on life's pathway. I enjoyed your take, Cheryl. Congrats on the winners' list
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/28/2017 9:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment and visit Andrea! Hugs~Che
Date: 1/28/2017 7:33:00 AM
Very nicely penned Cheryl...Congrats on your win..
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/28/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph; a nice surprise!:)
Date: 1/18/2017 3:40:00 PM
Very, very wise words spoken in this beautiful poem, Cheryl. A string of truth pearls in this monorhyme. You wear them well, my dear. Such a enlightening piece of poetry. A Souper 7 in my book. A fave for sure. I'll pass on the eulogy part at my funeral. No words need be spoken. Everything that needed to be said is summed up in life. This is a marvelous write. Love and many hugs to you.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/18/2017 7:15:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie; your words are very encouraging my friend! P & L & hugs~Che :)
Date: 1/12/2017 9:30:00 PM
Succinct summary of life! Good show! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/12/2017 9:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Matthew! Glad you liked it! Peace & love~Che
Date: 1/12/2017 6:27:00 PM
A very nice poem -- well written! It spoke to me of how, right after graduation, I fell in love and then landed an office job besides.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/12/2017 7:31:00 PM
Glad you liked and identified with it Arlene! Thanks for visit and kind comment too!~Che :)

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