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Phase Two

7/6/17 Now it's time for phase two So much beauty, it's amazing the way it grew Nearby evenly placed bamboo Clouds of rain drew Meanwhile a plane flew Straight through At Eight past Two While I had on a pair of grey shoes I kept on hearing crud, and the same news Hey you What I have to say is true I apologize if this is yet another thing you can't relate to And if it doesn't amaze you I'm still thankful to see yet another day, phew! Don't stay blue Do your best to make do Regardless of if you got to take two Does it do any good always having the same view? Or constantly playing on some kind of gamecube? It just may be new Or an aged clue

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Date: 7/6/2017 8:34:00 PM
what a great beat and message u wrote here Dalton, always be thankful, great stuff.
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Dalton Ogletree
Date: 7/8/2017 4:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Lewis! And yes, I'll keep being thankful :)

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