Phase Two

7/6/17

Now it's time for phase two

So much beauty, it's amazing the way it grew
Nearby evenly placed bamboo


Clouds of rain drew
Meanwhile a plane flew
Straight through
At Eight past Two

While I had on a pair of grey shoes
I kept on hearing crud, and the same news

Hey you
What I have to say is true
I apologize if this is yet another thing you can't relate to
And if it doesn't amaze you
I'm still thankful to see yet another day, phew!


Don't stay blue
Do your best to make do
Regardless of if you got to take two


Does it do any good always having the same view?
Or constantly playing on some kind of gamecube?

It just may be new
Or an aged clue
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Raynes Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 8:34 PM
what a great beat and message u wrote here Dalton, always be thankful, great stuff.
Ogletree Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Thank you very much Lewis! And yes, I'll keep being thankful :)
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