Phantom Fear

Phantom Fear A schizoid severe conjuring phantom fear Puddles of pain never to redeem and regain Demons at dawn seductive serpents spawn Abandoned by god forever fallaciously flawed Fallen angels spread devoured by the dead Embryonic evil sings flapping of wounded wings Meet my megalomania a silent schizophrenia Forever falling I hear the wavering wind calling Tangled in torment within a lachrymose lament Tightening the captive chain again and again. Aug.28.2017 Fear Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi
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Stars Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 1:41 PM
yeah from write to write ... total contradiction ... not sure what you smoke ing ... may be the music ...you dont try to trick us with gypsy voo doo do you ...
Allison Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 4:35 PM
the deep imagery is so so chilling, very well written ^WW^ :-) hugs jan xx
Daniel Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Fearful but beautifully written, ^WW^:)
Sathasivam Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 1:09 AM
Excellent. Deep imagery write. Thanks for sharing it.
Onclaud Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 11:13 PM
such a riveting work filled with stark images, WW... well done!.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 7:48 PM
I just got of hospital, and had a lot of weird dreams, this fits very well, loved this, and the music!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:50 PM
I totally agree w/Eve ... a brilliant kaleidoscope of imagery your talented pen paints, WW. Great lines throughout ... tangled in torment within a lachrymose lament. This poem is a winner in my book just by the phrase, "lachrymose lament." Your creative genius shines! Coulda easily been placed as Alliteration. Stellar poetry, my friend. Love and peace.
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Deep imagery ^WW^, luck in the contest:-)
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 3:44 PM
I guess phantom fear is just as bad--well depicted--good luck WW!
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