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Phantom Fear

Phantom Fear A schizoid severe conjuring phantom fear Puddles of pain never to redeem and regain Demons at dawn seductive serpents spawn Abandoned by god forever fallaciously flawed Fallen angels spread devoured by the dead Embryonic evil sings flapping of wounded wings Meet my megalomania a silent schizophrenia Forever falling I hear the wavering wind calling Tangled in torment within a lachrymose lament Tightening the captive chain again and again. Aug.28.2017 Fear Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi

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Pipping Stars

Date: 9/1/2017 1:41:00 PM

yeah from write to write ... total contradiction ... not sure what you smoke ing ... may be the music ...you dont try to trick us with gypsy voo doo do you ...

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2017 4:35:00 PM

the deep imagery is so so chilling, very well written ^WW^ :-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/30/2017 6:39:00 AM

Fearful but beautifully written, ^WW^:)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/30/2017 1:09:00 AM

Excellent. Deep imagery write. Thanks for sharing it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/28/2017 11:13:00 PM

such a riveting work filled with stark images, WW... well done!.. huggs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/28/2017 7:48:00 PM

I just got of hospital, and had a lot of weird dreams, this fits very well, loved this, and the music!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/28/2017 5:50:00 PM

I totally agree w/Eve ... a brilliant kaleidoscope of imagery your talented pen paints, WW. Great lines throughout ... tangled in torment within a lachrymose lament. This poem is a winner in my book just by the phrase, "lachrymose lament." Your creative genius shines! Coulda easily been placed as Alliteration. Stellar poetry, my friend. Love and peace.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2017 4:50:00 PM

Deep imagery ^WW^, luck in the contest:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/28/2017 3:44:00 PM

I guess phantom fear is just as bad--well depicted--good luck WW!