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Mesmerized by phantasmagorical flames flaunting cerise and crimson-colored tongues of fire, I marvel at the beauty of the beast. I see the chard scarlet underbelly of the fire cloaked in bellowing blankets of thick smoke, its flames lapping at a coating of hope someone had amply applied to their dream. I hear the glass windows screaming, as the broken panes shatter the illusion of a quiet death, and the house, no longer a home, crumbles. I witness life's irreplaceable memories melt like plastic soldiers stationed at the gates of hell, with little chance of rescue or survival. I smell the acrid stench of fear clinging to the hopelessness of a devastated family, like an inoperable cancer that has metastasized. And as I awaken to the stark reality that confronts me, a tear trickles down my cheek. (Free Verse) 11-04-2020 Ambedo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 7/23/2021 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Emile. Wonderful metaphor masterfully spun. Sooooo enjoyed this powerful, fiery write. Left me tingling and maybe a little scorched! Blessings.
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Date: 7/23/2021 12:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam, your encouraging words are most appreciated, and welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/6/2020 1:07:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously feel a part of your heart... expressed so well through your poetic ambedo. God bless you.
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Date: 11/6/2020 6:10:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2020 7:41:00 PM
Amazing! Congrats Emile!
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Date: 11/6/2020 6:10:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2020 12:48:00 PM
The imagery in this poem add a great value. My favorite is "plastic soldiers". Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 11/5/2020 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Rasitha, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2020 12:12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2020 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2020 5:45:00 AM
Some of the usage of words in your poem was just brilliant, to describe the emotions of ambedo.. The imagery of plastic soldiers and the comparison to fear with tumor cancer, gives this poem great impact... Congratulations on your first place in the contest...
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Date: 11/5/2020 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Silent One, I appreciate the win, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/4/2020 12:12:00 PM
This poem is so intense and beautiful. Your words truly painted such a vivid scene, one of a hellscape.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/4/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Kyler, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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