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Phantasmagorical Flames

Mesmerized by phantasmagorical flames brandishing cerise, fuchsia and crimson-colored tongues of fire; I marvel at the beauty of the beast. I see the chard smoldering underbelly of the flames, cloaked in bellowing blankets of thick smoke; its flames lapping at the coating of hope someone had amply applied to their dream home. I hear the glass windows screaming as the broken panes shatter the illusion of a quiet death; and the house, no longer a home, crumbles. I witness irreplaceable memories melt like plastic soldiers stationed at the gates of hell; with little chance of rescue or survival. I smell the acrid stench of fear clinging to the hopelessness of a devastated family; like an inoperable cancer that has metastasized. I grasp the stark reality that confronts me; and a tear trickles down my cheek.
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Kauffman Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations on your win Emile. Wonderful metaphor masterfully spun. Sooooo enjoyed this powerful, fiery write. Left me tingling and maybe a little scorched! Blessings.
Pinet Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Thanks so much, Sam, your encouraging words are most appreciated, and welcomed my friend, Emile.
Agustin Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 1:07 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously feel a part of your heart... expressed so well through your poetic ambedo. God bless you.
Pinet Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Seeker Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 7:41 PM
Amazing! Congrats Emile!
Pinet Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Ranasinghe Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 12:48 PM
The imagery in this poem add a great value. My favorite is "plastic soldiers". Congratulations on your placement.
Pinet Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Thanks Rasitha, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 12:12 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 5:45 AM
Some of the usage of words in your poem was just brilliant, to describe the emotions of ambedo.. The imagery of plastic soldiers and the comparison to fear with tumor cancer, gives this poem great impact... Congratulations on your first place in the contest...
Pinet Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 9:52 AM
Thanks Silent One, I appreciate the win, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Wortman Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 12:12 PM
This poem is so intense and beautiful. Your words truly painted such a vivid scene, one of a hellscape.
Pinet Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 2:47 PM
Thanks Kyler, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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