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Phantasmagoric Moments

For one moment I thought Moons stars and kingdoms, Humbly yielded to the spell of your tongue; For I would never miss such an honour When my heart still dies in front. From the gravest yard in my groans, In those rainy eyes of autumn, You stole into the fragrance of my desert red bloom; Despite the venom in my features, You killed the old beast in my gloom. For one moment I thought Flowers, bees, and dew drops Had never been bleeding forever; The honey have they made Fell us in love like a feather. For one moment I thought We stumbl’d upon each other.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 2/6/2013 11:59:00 AM
Congraats on the feature of your elegant poem, Yasser. It is an impressive write.
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yasser rhimi
Date: 2/7/2013 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Mohammad:)) My poem was just a condensation of a wish in one moment!!! Though not in structure, it may overlap with your wonderful tanka poem "Hug Me".
Date: 2/4/2013 10:54:00 PM
Yasser, :-) Congratulations with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent time here on the soup... I know I sure am. * or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA"
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yasser rhimi
Date: 2/5/2013 12:38:00 PM
Hi Linda :-) Thanx for your respect and regard! In fact, still, as a non-native speaker of English, I am just following on your foot steps . I sure am enjoying myself here on the soup...And despite life's incessant demands, I will try my best to make poetry the eyes of my wisdom... Always & Forever"