Phantasmagoria

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A constant ringing in the ear. It is completely insane. Unrelenting and frightening. I hope that it will leave soon. are you aware of the adage? Ear ringing refers to evoking around you. Sparks that are dying, creating an abyss. Casting life shades out of existence. Loops pursue delight as their goal. Bound to combine matters eternally. Love soared to a hypersonic speed. Written: December 11, 2022

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/11/2022 9:43:00 AM

ILLUSIONS, MAGIC, dream like visions 'Casting life shades out of existence, sparks light, hypersonic speed, hallucinations, frightening, unrelenting - a Greek word - meaning out of this world - images so real, a drama of horror. Loved this write LASAAD. Hugs, blessings JENNIFER.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/11/2022 8:51:00 AM

Goodness, no! I never heard that adage. You carried me right to fear with this, because I believe in realms of the unseen. I think the surrounds is Thick with “things.” But then, your ending is so Up. Is it that you came to terms? Or that It revealed itself as a positive? which is how I took it. The work is quite a trip…