Nette Onclaud Poet Triolet

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Phantasmagoria

In dreamscape teeming with mirage 
this soul an unwilling captive,
afloat with black moon's entourage 
In dreamscape teeming with mirage
through a strangely bizarre collage--
wake me O real hours active
In dreamscape teeming with mirage...
this soul an unwilling captive!


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Pick-A-Title, Vol 24- Triolet-Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh  11/02/2020

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Richard Lamoureux April 4, 2021 at 6:19 PM And now I’m a captive held within the spaces between your words. Blessings Rick.

Paul Callus November 13, 2020 at 1:33 PM Your Triolet transmits the essence of a phantasmagoria, Nette. Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul

Edward Ibeh November 13, 2020 at 11:41 AM Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellent triolet, Nette:-)

Janice Canerdy November 13, 2020 at 7:07 AM Excellent WINNING triolet, Nette! Janice

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2020 at 6:27 AM Congrats on your winner. Way to go. I hope this soul gets set free. SK

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2020 at 2:30 AM - Congratulations on your great win, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Watt November 12, 2020 at 10:04 PM I think I might have a nightmare tonight! Just kidding, but you did a great job making this spooky, Nette. Congratulations on your win ~ John

Eve Roper November 12, 2020 at 9:36 PM Congratulations , Nette, on the win!

Linda Alice Fowler November 12, 2020 at 5:37 PM Dark one Nette - Congratulations on the win! Linda

Alexis Y. November 12, 2020 at 3:12 PM Hi Nette, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2020 at 3:08 PM excellent rhyming lines, dear nette. Thanks for my win in your contest and best wishes in this triolet contest.

Susan Ashley November 3, 2020 at 10:01 AM Nette, I was willingly captured in your creative collage as it teems with dark poetic beauty. Your expressive pen spills a dreamscape of golden imagery. Best wishes for a win, dear poetess.. ~Susan

Lyva Marty November 2, 2020 at 7:26 PM Visually, psychologically arresting. A phantasm piercing the senses, Nette!