Joanna Daniel Poet Triolet

Phantasmagoria

Images of death enshroud me 
Blackness closes in, I stumble 
Silent shadows overcrowd me 
Images of death enshroud me 
Chasms of dark reflections cloud me 
Ebony mirages jumble
Images of death enshroud me 
Blackness closes in, I stumble


10.27.2020


Title: Phantasmagoria 
For Edward Ibeh's "Pick-a-Title: Vol.24, Triolet" contest

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Paul Callus November 13, 2020 at 1:26 PM Congratulations on placing first, Jo. Your words reflect the title you used. Regards // paul

Edward Ibeh November 13, 2020 at 11:42 AM Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellent triolet, Jo:-)

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2020 at 6:24 AM Congrats on your winner. SK

Regina Mcintosh November 13, 2020 at 6:03 AM Back to congratulate you on a top win :) God bless you always :)

Beata Agustin November 13, 2020 at 2:27 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for presenting such realistic perspective in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2020 at 2:24 AM - Congratulations on your great win, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Watt November 12, 2020 at 9:57 PM Intriguing images of the shadow of death closing in on those last moments. Well done, Jo, and congrats on your win today ~ John

Eve Roper November 12, 2020 at 9:30 PM Congratulations, Jo, on the win!

Linda Alice Fowler November 12, 2020 at 5:33 PM Dark and wonderful Jo! Congratulations on the win! Linda

Alexis Y. November 12, 2020 at 3:07 PM WoW!Jo, This is well written triolet. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2020 at 8:55 AM Evocative!

Anita Wilson October 27, 2020 at 2:30 PM Great Triolet! Best of luck

Victor Buhagiar October 27, 2020 at 6:28 AM A well composed triolet. Best for a win. ~~

Silent One October 27, 2020 at 6:05 AM Apparently there is a video game by this name... I see you used the word silent in this one.. This is a short but dark piece..

Regina Mcintosh October 27, 2020 at 4:32 AM A wonderful entry... love what you did with this contest theme :) God bless you