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Phantasmagoria

Images of death enshroud me Blackness closes in, I stumble Silent shadows overcrowd me Images of death enshroud me Chasms of dark reflections cloud me Ebony mirages jumble Images of death enshroud me Blackness closes in, I stumble 10.27.2020
Title: Phantasmagoria For Edward Ibeh's "Pick-a-Title: Vol.24, Triolet" contest

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Date: 11/13/2020 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on placing first, Jo. Your words reflect the title you used. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/13/2020 11:42:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this excellent triolet, Jo:-)
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Date: 11/13/2020 6:24:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. SK
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Date: 11/13/2020 6:03:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on a top win :) God bless you always :)
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Date: 11/13/2020 2:27:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for presenting such realistic perspective in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 11/13/2020 2:24:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2020 9:57:00 PM
Intriguing images of the shadow of death closing in on those last moments. Well done, Jo, and congrats on your win today ~ John
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Date: 11/12/2020 9:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Jo, on the win!
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Date: 11/12/2020 5:33:00 PM
Dark and wonderful Jo! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/12/2020 3:07:00 PM
WoW!Jo, This is well written triolet. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/30/2020 8:55:00 AM
Evocative!
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Date: 10/27/2020 2:30:00 PM
Great Triolet! Best of luck
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Date: 10/27/2020 6:28:00 AM
A well composed triolet. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 10/27/2020 6:05:00 AM
Apparently there is a video game by this name... I see you used the word silent in this one.. This is a short but dark piece..
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Date: 10/27/2020 4:32:00 AM
A wonderful entry... love what you did with this contest theme :) God bless you
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