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© Angel Hernandez

Phantasmagoria

Projected on to a large screen
The gruesome shape of evil’s face
A haunting form from Halloween.
Projected on to a large screen
A lantern cheats – don’t intervene
To stop the nightly ghoul’s forays
Projected on to a large screen
The gruesome shape of evil’s face.


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Pick-A-Title, Vol 24 – Triolet Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 
Chose: Title 2. Phantasmagoria  
          Placed 1st
© 20th October 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Canerdy Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:32 PM
Very descriptive poem--a winner, Paul! Janice
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Thank you, Janice. A pleasure to have you stopping by :) Regards // paul
Ibeh Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this brilliant triolet, Paul:-)
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Thank you, Edward. So pleased with my high placement. Best regards // paul
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November 13, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:48 PM
Thank you, Sara. Take care...regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:29 AM
- Congratulations on your great win, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:47 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise:) Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul
Watt Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 10:02 PM
Great Halloween write and congrats on your win in the Triolet contest, Paul!
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Thank you, John; you too did very well! Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Congratulations, Paul, on the win!
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Thank you, Eve. Regards & Hugs // paul
Fowler Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Dark and scary Paul - I like it! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:10 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Linda:) Thank you. Regards // paul
Y. Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 3:11 PM
Hi Paul, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Callus Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:10 PM
Thank you, Alexis. Best regards // paul
Tor Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 4:10 AM
Paul that picture says it all for your Halloween entry. Nice piece...
Callus Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 5:28 AM
Thank you, Michael. Glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul
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November 4, 2020 at 2:33 AM
Scary poem. Loved it ~~
Callus Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Thank you, Victor; nice to have you stopping by. Hope all is fine on your side of the island! Regards // paul
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November 3, 2020 at 8:44 PM
Spooky write, Paul. I enjoyed it :)
Callus Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 3:05 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Angela; thank you for stopping by :) Regards // paul
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October 28, 2020 at 7:31 AM
you did really well with your triolet, Paul, and the interpretation of phantasmagoria!
Callus Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Wonder how you're coping with teaching in these covid times! Regards // paul
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October 24, 2020 at 12:16 PM
'A lantern cheats - don't intervene, to stop the nightly ghoul's forays, projected on to a large screen,' an attack on Halloween ritual - a gruesome evil face, 'A haunting form of Halloween. Good luck in the contest my friend. Warm regards and blessings, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 12:30 PM
Thank you, Jenny. I'm no big fan of Halloween, but don't mind using it for inspiration :) ~ Warm regards & blessings // paul
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October 22, 2020 at 12:36 PM
love this Halloween piece, my friend
Callus Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Pleased it is to your liking, my friend...thank you. Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 12:25 PM
A beautiful deep poem with great imagery, Paul, enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Callus Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 2:22 PM
Thank you, Eve. I hope the judge is as generous as you are:) Hugs // paul
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October 21, 2020 at 10:21 AM
Love that word Paul, a perfect Halloween verse. Good luck Hope you're well. Tom
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Thank you, Tom. Busy, but keeping well:) Regards // paul
One Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Very spooky, you did this very well with this short form.
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 11:52 AM
Thank you S-1. Regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:08 AM
- A face that can give anyone and everyone nightmare ... great for the contest ... a winning poem for sure ... good luck, Paul :) - Hope everything is well :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:35 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. So far keeping well :) Regards & Hugs // paul
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October 21, 2020 at 4:27 AM
This is a spooky and intriguing write worthy of a win which I wish for you my dear friend. God bless you
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:34 AM
Thank you for having faith in my entry, Regina:) Regards & blessings // paul
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Hi Paul, This is a good entry for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day- Alexis
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:20 AM
Thank you on all counts, Alexis. May you too have a lovely and productive day:) // paul
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October 20, 2020 at 3:46 PM
Haunting form of Halloween--gruesome evil's face--great imagery Paul. All the best.
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:19 AM
Thank you, Vijay. Your visits are always appreciated. Regards // paul
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