Petites and Faeries

Petites and Faeries, it is said, live just beyond that hill
       Their Moondust dazzles breathlessly, on nights so calm and still
Some town folk treasure innocence and so they understand
         That humble souls are they who settled just beyond their land

Not much is known of Faerie land, save for it’s golden glow
                     Surrounded by the ever bloom of flowered Thistle-toe
A bit of mischief often finds its way into the town
          When certain unexplained events cause some to bear a frown

The Faeries’ pranks are just a bit of fun to catch a smile
                         And often there’s a bag of gold left just to reconcile
Their gifts should not be squandered or dismissed without esteem
              For wondrous things can happen for our sharing to redeem

Petites and Faeries, man and creatures all to grace the times
                 A magic poem filled of peace with every line that rhymes
If Moondust could embrace the hearts of all who live nearby
         Perhaps, some would not run in fear when Faeries, they see fly

But hope lives on for anyone who sees the world with love
                Despite the differences of some who hold the world above
To end this tale on happy notes and songs to gather dance
                    Let’s say, that it’s all up to us and not just up to chance

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Date: 2/11/2022 8:15:00 AM
Delightful! I love the magic that surrounds your poem filled with faeries, moondust and dreams that add up to love. :)Paulette
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/13/2022 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Paulette xxoo
Date: 1/23/2022 6:50:00 PM
Magical and Enchanting, It gave my imagination full reign. Many thank yous, Mike
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/24/2022 4:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Shirley !!!
Date: 1/22/2022 7:35:00 AM
Ah, so beautifully written. I love the imagery, the delicacy, the delightfulness. I am putting this into my FAVE list Mike. Thank you!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2022 8:08:00 AM
Thanks so much Caren, I am so happy that you liked it xxoo
Date: 1/22/2022 2:43:00 AM
I love this, Mike. Great rhythm and flow and a heartfelt message at the end. Nice way to start of my morning with this read. Have a nice weekend. Charlie
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2022 5:03:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, same to you !!!
Date: 1/21/2022 10:16:00 PM
Love how you weave this poem, into a moral statement.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2022 5:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Harry!!
Date: 1/21/2022 1:16:00 PM
This is so fun and yes it is all up to us. Love it Mike! :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2022 2:44:00 PM
I’m so glad, thanks Heidi!!!
Date: 1/21/2022 9:48:00 AM
Wow! a FAV for me, Mike. I certainly hope Caren reads this one, for she will feel both vindicated and refreshed by your understanding of that interesting realm. Hope you have a fantastic weekend, friend.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2022 9:56:00 AM
That's so kind, thanks Milt!! Hope your weekend is great too!
Date: 1/21/2022 6:43:00 AM
You take the reader to the realms of fantasy Mike in your well written fairytale. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2022 7:15:00 AM
And you as well Tom! Thanks
Date: 1/21/2022 5:44:00 AM
Another example of your rhyming skills that bring forth imagery of life and people --as you do in this magical write. I like the depth and message of your final stanza, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2022 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, I am so glad that it resonated with you!!
Date: 1/21/2022 5:31:00 AM
In case I haven't told you, your line cadence is wonderfully rhythmical. This write is also very charming, and I could picture the scene of the glow from over the hill. Soup mail, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2022 6:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Lin xxoo
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