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Petals of Pain

The rose that bears delicate flowers, adorned with soft scented petals, resplendent in many shapes and color hues, bears a stem of thorns from which pain ensues, to the hand that grasps the rose for closer view. For the closer we get to enjoy loves ecstasy fulfilled The more we risk the pain of petals turned to thorns, pointed poignant. In the backlash of disdain, with love lost again, to the black petals of pain, in whorled layers of regret and suffering.
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Empress Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 5:47 AM
Dear John, this is beautiful and so very well written and i just saw your arrangement of lines and the black rose picture too, is gorgeous! I love the last lines the most in this. Thank you for sharing ~ congratulations on your win
Anderson Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 9:23 AM
Thanks very much for your kind thoughts. Cheers and Best wishes
Goldsmith Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 9:42 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Petals Of Pain" write. Did you know, there is a black rose??? "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one... Have a blessed day writing away....................
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Roses say much. They are beautiful yet thorns are present.
Anderson Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Thanks very much for your comment. Cheers and best wishes. Have fun!
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