Petals In the Wind

Entering the gates of spring A new panorama unfolding Almond blossoms all around Oodles of beauty all around Splendid white flowering trees Petals on the ground layered To welcome the onlooker to the heavenly sights Under each tree Petal showering down And playing with the wind A smile on each face Such view brings A dance of smiles and petals A dance of wind and fragrance Spring air and blossoms Dancing to the tunes of nature Wings gifted to all the viewers Each lifted to a dreamland Dreamland of heavenly bliss Each kiss of petals falling from the trees Makes you feel lighter and lighter And in no time, everyone starts dancing With those petals in the wind…
Irfana Ali Bhat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 6:51 PM
another beauty in the winners list me to review. Congrats, Irfana. I remember commenting on this one before and your win is well deserved.
Kendrick Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 5:23 PM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Congrats..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on your winning Irfana luv, sorry it's late xx
Bunton Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your win!! :)
Squyres Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 9:34 AM
What a joyful happy poem...I'm dancing with you !! So lovely !! Congrats on your win !!
A   Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Hello irfana, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
Lamoureux Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Wow, I love it. I am transfixed by this gorgeous dance you have choreographed. Thanks so much for your visits, I am always moved by your thoughtful comments.
Williams Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 9:36 AM
Irfana yep this definitely lifts me up, well done...David
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 8:18 PM
wow. Irfana, very impressive!!! I hope I can try this contest and do one this well. Thanks for your comment to my "sat and pondered" poem. Luv, Andrea
Merryman Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 11:16 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem, Irfana! Best wishes in the contest. Love , Kim
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 10:12 AM
thanks kim....:))
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Your words dance within my mind like the perals in the wind.
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 10:12 AM
thanks..:))
Poet Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 8:59 AM
See you have come back with such a beautiful poem!Love this.
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 10:12 AM
ur advice helped....thanks kash..:))
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