Petals

I'll stay right here, waiting for you
Here where the sky's still blue
And true love holds true
Here where the mangoes bruise
But still squeeze sweet juice

I'll stay right here, pine after love
Here where the dew sits cold
And morning brings doves
Here where breeze and butterflies
Flowergasm air and land

I'll stay right here, pretty and perfect
Here where beauty fades but never ends
I'll stay right here, radiant and dashing
Here for a time, among many like me
Many like me, beautiful in a brightly-colored, sad and broken way
Wilting away waiting for you
You that sees just me among many like me
I pray you come to me soon
Lest I be pluck't by a more timely, less desirable hand
I'll stay right here, my love
Hurry... I can't stop them from falling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Agwu Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 2:24 AM
A creative aberration on a rhyming couplet, maybe?
Opara Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 3:38 AM
You are a gem! Thanks, sweetheart. But I think I'll just leave it at Free Verse. Lol
Opara Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 3:29 AM
Can anyone help with identifying this form? It just doesn't... conform. :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace