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Petals

They dance on the edge
Of nearly unperceived breezes
Into a swath of glowing light
They slowly open, as it teases! 
Each petal like little poems
So soft and ever so gentle
Untorn in the warm amber glow
Healing our sore souls indoor! 
Dewdrops moistening those petals
Making me totally sentimental
In silence you protect the core
The bee tied to this moment, I adore! 
Holding on to you to feel stable
For the nectar you offer at your round table
And when each petal withers and dies
You blow with the breeze to fly
As you wave and say your last goodbye! 

12.5.23

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/14/2023 6:06:00 PM
Great imagery and warm feeling in your verse, Carol. Soup Mail on the next book. Many blessings my friend
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/14/2023 10:44:00 PM
Hi Eve Roper thanks and warm feelings always:)
Date: 5/14/2023 4:02:00 AM
A nicely crafted poem, Carol, Congratulations on your contest win.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/14/2023 4:30:00 AM
Thank you Sotto Poet.... much appreciated :)

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