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Petal

Pink and perfect mystery to which I ply my finger, she ripens so exquisitely the longer that I linger and fluff the modest blossom with my gentle loving hand, teasing, ever pleasing so that now I understand how beautiful the flower that yields without duress, blooming now so fully in the warmth of my caress.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/22/2012 2:55:00 PM
It doesn't get any better than this. My simple mind finds beauty and the exquisite expression of something I just can't explain in this tender gem. What does a person do when they run out of words, but the feelings are there.
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:47:00 PM
Wow, exquisitely delivered. Another masterpiece. You've painted a beautiful picture and your emotional descriptions are absolutely captivating and breathtaking! Maturity at it's best uh?
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:46:00 PM
Wow, exquisitely delivered. Another masterpiece. You've painted a beautiful picture and your emotional descriptions are absolutely captivating and breathtaking! Maturity at it's best uh?
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:28:00 AM
wow, the metaphor works beautifully here!!!
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