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  ants munch
your lunch

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Terry Miller

Date: 8/23/2025 7:59:00 AM

So good, congratulations

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/23/2025 1:16:00 AM

It's seems congrats are in order for this winning entry. The ants are happy too, I'm sure. ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/22/2025 4:58:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, S.V. :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/23/2025 1:12:00 AM

Thank you so much

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2025 4:13:00 PM

Dropping by with congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Those pesky ants can ruin some food. Thanks for sharing this one. Sara K

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/23/2025 1:12:00 AM

Thank you so much

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/22/2025 3:14:00 PM

Good one! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/23/2025 1:12:00 AM

Thank you so much

Robert Sidwell

Date: 8/22/2025 10:03:00 AM

The unexpected simplicity of your poem made me chuckle. I loved it!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/22/2025 10:26:00 AM

In that case, I achieved my aim. Thanks for you comment Robert. :)