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Pessimistic Love

Love is
the morning dew...
lurking, looming
effervescent
enigmatic
...burned
...gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/21/2011 12:57:00 AM
Nice one JS....all smiles...chiquita
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Date: 7/11/2011 1:26:00 PM
a touching write and so sad.
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Date: 7/10/2011 9:39:00 AM
A sad reflection on love, Joey. Many of us can relate to these feelings, though. Thank you for your encouragement. My computer time is limited due to back problems. Perhaps you could write about Atlantis for my mystery contest? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:18:00 AM
It seems like one of those forms where you count syllables going small, long, and back to small! Hey, JS , thanks for telling me your son liked the poem. I need to remember to find other poems for ya. Just so busy. I can barely get to my comments. it's after 2 a.m and I better get to sleep soon!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/9/2011 7:58:00 PM
many emotions expressed JS on the qualities and values luv presents.. great presentation luv..
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Date: 7/9/2011 12:20:00 PM
love's gone so quickly like a bubble made disappeary. so profound your poem is, encapsulated in an eleven-piece! bravolta,pal! =)
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Date: 7/9/2011 11:46:00 AM
That was a short lived romance. You put it all in a nutshell, nay a thimble. Good job JS. Rockman.
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