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Pessimistic Love

Love is
the morning dew...
lurking, looming
effervescent
enigmatic
...burned
...gone

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

September 21, 2011 at 12:57 AM

Nice one JS....all smiles...chiquita

James Foulk

July 11, 2011 at 1:26 PM

a touching write and so sad.

Carolyn Devonshire

July 10, 2011 at 9:39 AM

A sad reflection on love, Joey. Many of us can relate to these feelings, though. Thank you for your encouragement. My computer time is limited due to back problems. Perhaps you could write about Atlantis for my mystery contest? Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

July 10, 2011 at 1:18 AM

It seems like one of those forms where you count syllables going small, long, and back to small! Hey, JS , thanks for telling me your son liked the poem. I need to remember to find other poems for ya. Just so busy. I can barely get to my comments. it's after 2 a.m and I better get to sleep soon!! Luv, Andrea