Perspectives

When I was young
  laughter and love played
at the corners of the world's
  smiling face

They still do
  though I am no longer young
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Shaw Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Laughter cures all ails I hear, sometimes we lose it to others negativity, to chains that bind, just like the first comment it just takes someone that can lift you back to where you belong, a happy Gershon . . . : )
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 4:22 PM
Very nice of you to write a comment like this, Indiana. Mucho appreciato! Happy Friday, Gershon
Boles Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:56 PM
They say "Age is just a number" and to me, "Youth is eternal if you let your spirit believe it is". Not easy to achieve they say. Wonderful write Gershon!!ab
Wolf Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 5:20 PM
Go for it, Anselmo... As for me: The spirit is very willing; often, however, the flesh is very weak. Joys of aging, gw
Turner Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 10:54 AM
Nicely penned Gershon. The smile has receded a bit too but yes they are both still there.
Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 3:53 PM
There are exercises, I've heard, for a 'receding smile.' LOL. (That's the first exercise). ~ gw
Hankins Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 8:34 AM
You have written a wonderful little poem, Gershon. So true, too!
Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Milt, you have done a great good deed today. Your comment has lifted my spirits from a dark place. The last 48 hours had been stormy for me. Just reading this comment has lifted my gloom and the surrounding storm. I really mean it, and I thank you for reaching out to a friend in need!! Many blessings; much bounty. Light and Hope, Gershon
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