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Perspective: Glass Lightning

Lightning creeps from 'neath the night, or could that be a crack?-- for what I see could actually be a break in evening's black. Stained like windows in a church, the night must be in pane: a sheet comprised of sickly hues, of ashen clouds and rain. Someone must have dropped the night and smashed the glass asunder, for look!--the jagged lightnings run and shatter into thunder!

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Date: 8/1/2010 6:23:00 PM
enjoyed reading today! Well done!!
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Date: 8/1/2010 6:11:00 PM
Loved the language and imagery you have used- very enjoyable, Kris
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Date: 8/1/2010 4:24:00 PM
Great metaphoric language that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed the reading of your work..Sara
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