PERSPECTIVE

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mesmerising
   bleakness
angst
in
muted
   unease
an empty
   nothingness
a
glimpse
into
  the void
a
  dread
   from within
this
  sombre
    sense
of
  disenchantment


OPEN FORM in lowercase without grammatical symbols ,uses spaces&breaks relying upon 'the one breath limitation' & as a  'happening' requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input &respond in a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood & thus is inherently variable.

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Valsa George

Date: 7/28/2025 2:47:00 AM

Very ingeniously done! The image is open to many interpretations, so is the poem.