Personification to Fantasyland

Pages flying
Thunder clapping
Sun shining
Hearts breaking
Snowflakes dancing
Willows weeping
Wind whistling

It's all personification- but what if we switched them around:

Pages whistling
Thunder flying
Sun clapping
Hearts shining
Snowflakes breaking
Willows dancing
Wind weeping

Sounds like fantasyland- maybe that's where elves make toys, fairies fly, dwarves mine, trolls sing and dance, and gnomes do... whatever gnomes do.
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Achara Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Fantasy contest. Your poem was a pleasure to read. What do Gnomes do?
Knutson Avatar
February 27, 2024 at 8:06 PM
Thanks! I still have no idea. ;)
Achara Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 7:03 PM
"...whatever gnomes do." I love that line. An enjoyable read.
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