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Personal Senryu Inspired

Have existed in yellow 

Peaked with gold

Now living in blue

Splendored by red

No longer covered in black

but, staind in deep purple



SunshineWilliams

absencebereavementinspirationpersonasenryu

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Eve Roper

July 4, 2015 at 12:22 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 5:01 PM

Hugs back & thank you so much Eve :), jill

Richard Lamoureux

July 4, 2015 at 8:33 AM

I enjoyed your colourful approach. Congrats.

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 5:02 PM

Thank you Richard :), jill

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 3, 2015 at 10:20 PM

Vibrant colours of ur poetry mesmerise jill, congrats on super win!

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 5:02 PM

Thank you for your beautiful words Doctor :), jill

D.W. Rodgers

July 3, 2015 at 8:58 PM

Congrats on your multicoloured poem and your win

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 5:03 PM

Thank you Dave :), jill

Skat A

July 3, 2015 at 6:47 PM

Hi Jill, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 5:04 PM

Thanks soo much SKAT A! :), jill

Poet Destroyer A

July 3, 2015 at 6:24 PM

Jill, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 5:05 PM

I return your love...thank you Linda! :), jill

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2015 at 4:47 PM

very colorful one. Congrats for your win.

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 5:06 PM

Thank you sooo much Andrea, it's nice getting to know you :), jill

Kim Merryman

July 3, 2015 at 4:36 PM

Beautifully written senryu, Jill! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 4:59 PM

Thank you so much :), jill

Kp Nunez

July 3, 2015 at 5:20 AM

Jill, reading your notes and reply to Jim's comment gave me the proper perspective in how to appreciate this senryu, for it comes from deep inside you. Hope it got the win and recognition it deserves. You are appreciated, lady. hugs!

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 5:08 PM

Thanks for taking time to get me! I am enjoying getting to know you & your works very much!! Hugs back-at-ya :), jill

Marvin G. Celestial

July 3, 2015 at 4:48 AM

Great Jill! Congratz! You did best!

Jill Spagnola

July 23, 2015 at 5:07 PM

Thank you very, very much Mr. Celestial :), jill

Skat A

May 28, 2015 at 8:51 AM

You helped paint a beautiful image and feeling. Jill, thank you for sharing your inspirational thoughts. Skat

Jill Spagnola

July 5, 2015 at 4:56 PM

Thanks Skat :)

Richard Lamoureux

May 24, 2015 at 8:31 PM

Such a nice dedication.

Afolabi Muideen

May 23, 2015 at 10:48 PM

Excellent write Jill,this is dedicated for a friend,........well penned........Afolabi.

Joseph May

May 22, 2015 at 10:07 PM

These are descriptive of the many moods that color our emotions...nicely penned...thanks for stopping by...:-}

Jill Spagnola

May 22, 2015 at 2:25 PM

Thank you for sharing your attitude of gratitude. I have many things I am grateful for. However, when God created these infinite cosmos of the Universe, she chose specific species to walk in twos on Earth until they each meet again on the other side. Enjoy your view :) I hang tuf...no worries, Jill I hope I did not insult you by taking inspiration from your poem, you didn't say.

James Marshall Goff

May 22, 2015 at 1:30 PM

Jill, today....when i walk in the woods, i can smell pine-needles underfoot as Red Pines tower above me (there is actually a red (Norway) Pine within reach on my deck of my 2nd story condo!) a blessing i am grateful for, that is enough....

James Marshall Goff

May 22, 2015 at 7:18 AM

nice, Jill! truncated "staind" works well....have dappled in use of "color palette, myself" have those cool color-glass in iron "garden sculptures" at my condo....put'im in my community garden plot for summer.....your end-line use of palette words is cool.....happy holiday! jimbo

Jill Spagnola

May 22, 2015 at 12:59 PM

I knew you would respond! The title to my poem is an indirect dedication to you, who taught me Senryu :] I'm a fan. This holiday has been the most difficult for me for the last 7 years. This is the 8th Memorial Day without my husband. Earlier in one of your replys you inquired about SunshineWilliams. She is our daughter that I will one day meet on the other side along with my Jimmy. For know I will breathe. Thanks for helping me to take deeper breaths Jimbo!

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