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Oh grand pa let me tell you this tale 
Of captain Ahab and the great white whale
And how  that whale he prevailed 
Now the thing is with little girls telling these tall  tales 
they can change  the ending and my mummy slayed that whale.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A. Sharma Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 12:37 AM
Congrats on ur deserved big win with this awesome write stephen..
Pennell  Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 5:24 AM
thank you
Scars Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Stephen, thank you for your heartwarming poem and for being a part of my contest :)-luoo
Pennell  Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 5:23 AM
thanks for the placement , mums rule x
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 2:27 PM
this is cute!! Glad I stopped by to see it
Pennell  Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 3:27 PM
cheers , only re wrote an american classic lol
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 5:43 AM
Oh mum's can do anything Stephen - the ending made me smile:-) hugs jan xx
Pennell  Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 6:56 AM
mums are the best for sure cheers
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