Personal Freedom

Stepping on the edge and ready to fly
Up side down right to hell
Ive answered to all questions except - why?
Being free in my own personal cell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
November 6, 2024 at 6:50 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 28, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Andrei Andrei Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 5, 2016 at 1:01 PM
Hi Andrei,, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
Brown Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 5:24 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Andrei. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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