Marvin G. Celestial Poet Haiku

Personal Existence

Remnants of the past
Haunting and exuding light
Goals achieved with ease

Dreaming seems like game
Energy glows from beyond
Thoughts manifest things 

Countless of options
Make random steps to succeed
Awareness goes through

Happiness comes vague
Exert efforts to flourish
Eternal repose

Exuberant mind
Inward attracts the same kind 
Insurmountable.

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Ralph Sergi July 26, 2015 at 8:10 AM I'm in awe of this profound prose My compliments! Thanks for your comment on my Being misjudged. i enjoyed your contest. It brought out the best in me. Marvin G. Celestial August 18, 2015 at 8:58 AM Great Ralph thank you! Welcome as well!

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2015 at 10:37 PM philosophical 'ku!! Thought I would check out your work and glad I did! Marvin G. Celestial July 24, 2015 at 7:23 AM Great thanks Andrea!

Harry Horsman July 12, 2015 at 8:34 AM These are awesome,,,, Marvin G. Celestial July 24, 2015 at 7:23 AM THanks Harry!

Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2015 at 9:10 AM I f I was the judge for your contest this would have scored high. Thanks for choosing my poem, much appreciated. I enjoyed reading and commenting on all the winning pieces. Marvin G. Celestial July 4, 2015 at 9:53 AM Great Rich! thanks!

Kp Nunez June 22, 2015 at 6:35 AM Very wise strings of senryu. Lovely, kabayan. Kim :-) Marvin G. Celestial June 22, 2015 at 6:43 AM Thanks a lot Kim!