Personal Beauty

When I was young.....
My personal beauty was of great concern to me,
Now that I am older, wiser and mature..........
My personal beauty beauty is of even greater concern.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Teagan Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 10:47 PM
lol This seems like an honest realization that many might relate to :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 1:56 AM
I love the honesty in this piece. I feel we all want to look our best and as we see the years pile up on our presence we strive to do all we can to stop it. Excellent David! : ) xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 7:41 PM
oh this is SO SPOT ON (at least for me it is) FAVE
Onclaud Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 3:38 PM
that little part of vanity in us never fails to stun us...splendidly crafted in such short lines, david.. huggs
Sergi Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 7:58 AM
You're Right , David: I decided to go into denial.
Pandit Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 7:55 AM
So true ..we all can relate to this..you said it so well, David.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 7:18 AM
I’m like, “what! Where did that wrinkle come from! Not another one” and especially when the wrinkle intersects and looks like a Y. We could start a forest fire of conversation off your poem :)
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Ha, Ha, David! Wonderful non-sequitur there. Enjoyed. ~ Gershon Wolf
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