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When I was young..... My personal beauty was of great concern to me, Now that I am older, wiser and mature.......... My personal beauty beauty is of even greater concern.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 6/30/2019 10:47:00 PM
lol This seems like an honest realization that many might relate to :)
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Date: 6/23/2019 1:56:00 AM
I love the honesty in this piece. I feel we all want to look our best and as we see the years pile up on our presence we strive to do all we can to stop it. Excellent David! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/22/2019 7:41:00 PM
oh this is SO SPOT ON (at least for me it is) FAVE
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Date: 6/21/2019 3:38:00 PM
that little part of vanity in us never fails to stun us...splendidly crafted in such short lines, david.. huggs
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Date: 6/20/2019 7:58:00 AM
You're Right , David: I decided to go into denial.
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Date: 6/20/2019 7:55:00 AM
So true ..we all can relate to said it so well, David.
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Date: 6/20/2019 7:18:00 AM
I’m like, “what! Where did that wrinkle come from! Not another one” and especially when the wrinkle intersects and looks like a Y. We could start a forest fire of conversation off your poem :)
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Date: 6/19/2019 9:00:00 PM
Ha, Ha, David! Wonderful non-sequitur there. Enjoyed. ~ Gershon Wolf
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