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Personal Beauty

When I was young..... My personal beauty was of great concern to me, Now that I am older, wiser and mature.......... My personal beauty beauty is of even greater concern.

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Becca Teagan

Date: 6/30/2019 10:47:00 PM

lol This seems like an honest realization that many might relate to :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/23/2019 1:56:00 AM

I love the honesty in this piece. I feel we all want to look our best and as we see the years pile up on our presence we strive to do all we can to stop it. Excellent David! : ) xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2019 7:41:00 PM

oh this is SO SPOT ON (at least for me it is) FAVE

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2019 3:38:00 PM

that little part of vanity in us never fails to stun us...splendidly crafted in such short lines, david.. huggs

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/20/2019 7:58:00 AM

You're Right , David: I decided to go into denial.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/20/2019 7:55:00 AM

So true ..we all can relate to this..you said it so well, David.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2019 7:18:00 AM

I’m like, “what! Where did that wrinkle come from! Not another one” and especially when the wrinkle intersects and looks like a Y. We could start a forest fire of conversation off your poem :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/19/2019 9:00:00 PM

Ha, Ha, David! Wonderful non-sequitur there. Enjoyed. ~ Gershon Wolf