Caren Krutsinger Poet Monorhyme

Persnickety Porcupine

Persnickety porcupine are you a rodent then?
Are those quills at the end of your tiny chin-chin?
To the ocean, have you ever travelled or been?
Swimming with porpoises next to your prickly skin?

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Sotto Poet February 4, 2022 at 6:44 AM It's always a pleasure to read your intricately made poetry; there's always something new to learn. Karen, We appreciate you introducing the term "persnickety." Caren Krutsinger February 4, 2022 at 8:48 PM I love that word! I truly always have!

L Milton Hankins February 3, 2022 at 11:32 AM Love the word "persnickety." Don't think I've ever used it in a poem, but I'm thinking about it. Caren Krutsinger February 4, 2022 at 1:59 AM I use it all the time. I LOVE it!