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Persnickety

“Persnickety” is placing too much emphasis On trivial or minor details **** is another good way to describe it Uptightness usually prevails Be careful when you call someone persnickety Most don't take to it kindly Better be ready to defend yourself my friends They'll come at you swinging wildly Don't know why people get so damn upset It's only a word for goodness sakes It's better than calling them a “nincompoop” Or even a “gorilla face” Well it's still not exactly a compliment I'd say The opposite most likely is true A persnickety person can drive you up the wall And you'll feel like throwing your shoes © Jack Ellison 2014
Inspired by Carol Eastman's Dragon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/7/2014 1:34:00 PM
Dragon likes 'Gorilla Face'. He's seen your picture and wants a white beard, too! Thinks it'll make him look very wise! But he can't fool us! He wants to look like Jack... and Santa Claus. Cause everyone loves Jack and Santa... But Grandpa Troll said Poor Dragon will never get a beard. To distract him I got a baseball throwing machine to get his chocolates to his mouth... But he jumps when it goes off and they miss his mouth! His penguins get them all! Quick little guys! Who would of thunk?
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2014 5:02:00 PM
Send me a picture if old Gorilla Face manages to grow a beard! LOL XOXOX
Date: 2/7/2014 10:25:00 AM
lol What a fun poem; enjoyed the playfulness. Great job; really cool piece. Kudos! :)
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Date: 2/7/2014 11:10:00 AM
Thank you my friend... much appreciated! Glad you got a charge out of it!!!
Date: 2/7/2014 7:43:00 AM
Haven't seen or heard that word in a long time. thanks for the chuckle and I may also have to work it into a conversation today...John
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:49:00 AM
LOL Thanks for dropping by my new friend! Cheers!
Date: 2/7/2014 7:40:00 AM
Thanks for the chuckle this morning. I will have to use it today....Tim
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:48:00 AM
Let me know how that all works out! LOL Jack
Date: 2/7/2014 6:43:00 AM
My wife can be awfully persnickety at times and she doesn't even know she's doing it! I wouldn't exactly call that word a bad word, it just describes a certain type of person, and my person is very loving and wonderful, just a little attentive to details! Oh this word is perfect for her really, I'm glad you wrote a poem about it...I will share it with her! Hee hee! Oh don't worry, she won't get mad, maybe a smidgen defensive, but not mad! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning!!
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Date: 2/7/2014 6:46:00 AM
Must be careful my friend, the ladies can be very sensitive at times! LOL

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