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Persian Haiku 3

Persian Haiku 3 Persian Haiku 3 Two wings are enough! To go further than too far, What about this cage? God is everywhere. There are too many crimes here, Where the hell are you? My soul is dusty. My body is too rusty. Maybe I'm buried. You heard me crying. You wanted to heal my wound. My heart was bleeding. I am a bandit. I wanted to steal your heart. Somebody stole mine. What is happening? Lizards were dinosaurs! Hope for a flower. Where are we going? Destination is unknown. Let’s make a U-turn. Who is lonelier? An eagle or a vulture When there is no food. I don't plant flowers. Flowers don't have devotion. They leave soon after. Let me go away. Like a mountain, majestic. The further we are. I'm reading Winter. I’m done with summer and fall. What happened to spring? We are both crying, Sad and gloomy, sky and I. Our eyes are so wet. 5/4/18 Haloo

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Johnson Vdev

Date: 11/27/2019 10:14:00 PM

You write very well..each one has a beauty ... I am enthralled Like a butterfly Hovering over bloom

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/30/2019 6:38:00 AM

I especially love this wonderful marching procession of haiku.... A fav my friend...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/31/2019 1:47:00 AM

Thank you Robert, you're so kind.

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 12/3/2018 11:24:00 AM

Amazing, subtle and shining. Human soul and nature in harmony. It may be true that not mind or heart (intelligence and feelings) lead us, but our habits. The second nature could be our good or well habits. Also as a kind of angels: personal habits.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/3/2018 6:31:00 PM

You are too kind Bumblebee...

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/27/2018 12:53:00 AM

excellent mystic and metaphysical Haiku.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/27/2018 1:00:00 AM

Thank you moonlight.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/13/2018 10:52:00 AM

Hi Pashang, your Haiku show your poetic skill. Each one does sing into my mind and create such strong imagery. This string of Haiku go into my faves. Wonderful work my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/13/2018 11:05:00 AM

Thanks Mike, you are so kind.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/12/2018 10:31:00 AM

You very creatively displayed your skills my dear, well done...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/12/2018 10:11:00 PM

Thank you Charlie...

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/12/2018 1:52:00 PM

This string of haiku is a great reflection of your wonderful talent. Well done! Hugs. Pandita

Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/13/2018 5:26:00 PM

Thanks, Pandita... did you that our initials are the same... PS

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/1/2018 1:35:00 AM

Beautiful, I am a fan also of Persian poetry!!!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/1/2018 1:25:00 PM

Thank you, Arthur...

Joseph May

Date: 5/12/2018 9:14:00 AM

Very creative haiku...Nicely done..

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/17/2018 1:48:00 PM

Thank you ...

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/12/2018 7:44:00 AM

Very well crafted my friend...you must be haiku'd out lol...love and light...^WW^

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/17/2018 1:47:00 PM

Kind of.... LOL

Jean Murray

Date: 5/9/2018 11:39:00 AM

Your muse is certainly not buried Pashang.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/10/2018 2:32:00 AM

... but it is dusty... Thanks Jean..

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/9/2018 5:49:00 AM

Excellent haiku, cleverly written. Thanks for sharing it.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/10/2018 2:31:00 AM

Thanks Ravi...

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/8/2018 6:47:00 PM

A clever write! An adept pen! A talented poet! A pleasure to read your write. Stay bright and blessed.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/8/2018 6:57:00 PM

thank you my dear..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/8/2018 6:41:00 AM

Ah, this is an awesome string of haiku's , one more interesting then the other, Well done Pashang, thank you for sharing, have a great day

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/8/2018 6:55:00 PM

My new friend Pixie, thank you my dear...

Eve Roper

Date: 5/7/2018 11:47:00 PM

Victor and Paul are right the poems so we'll said and each one takes time to desern

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/8/2018 6:55:00 PM

Eve you are too kind...

Paul Callus

Date: 5/7/2018 10:10:00 AM

An excellent offering, Pashang. You show a keen eye for creativity. These points you brought up deserve at least some moments of meditation. Regards // paul

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/7/2018 10:42:00 AM

Thanks Paul... Indeed..

Maria Williams

Date: 5/6/2018 7:26:00 AM

What a great string of Haiku Pashang. Each set is interestingly intense, "life's lessons" in each. As you know I love this form of Poetry, and yours was a real treat to read......Maria hugs:)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/7/2018 10:41:00 AM

It was just for you....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2018 7:55:00 PM

I really enjoyed these, Pashang. They show different emotions. LIke Jan, I also really liked the one about reading winter and the last line of last one: our eyes are so wet.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/8/2018 6:58:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2018 4:49:00 PM

what a fabulous string of poems Pashang. i particularly liked 'I'm reading winter. I’m done with summer and fall. What happened to spring?' and 'Who is lonelier? An eagle or a vulture When there is no food.'. Thanks for sharing your wonderful words:-) hugs jan xx

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/5/2018 2:50:00 AM

Thanks Jan... we are both Eagles and the vultures...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/4/2018 2:45:00 PM

So many life lessons in such few words, Pashang! True words of wisdom!!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/5/2018 2:49:00 AM

Thanks Vijay... I solved so many problems for everybody, but I'm lost on my own....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2018 2:02:00 PM

- A wonderful series of haiku, Pashang - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/5/2018 2:46:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise... you're too kind.