Pashang Salehi Poet Haiku

Persian Haiku 3

Persian Haiku 3

Persian Haiku 3


Two wings are enough!
To go further than too far,
What about this cage?


God is everywhere.
There are too many crimes here,
Where the hell are you?


My soul is dusty.
My body is too rusty.
Maybe I'm buried.


You heard me crying.
You wanted to heal my wound.
My heart was bleeding.


I am a bandit.
I wanted to steal your heart.
Somebody stole mine.


What is happening?
Lizards were dinosaurs!
Hope for a flower.


Where are we going?
Destination is unknown.
Let’s make a U-turn.




Who is lonelier?
An eagle or a vulture 
When there is no food.


I don't plant flowers.
Flowers don't have devotion.
They leave soon after.


Let me go away.
Like a mountain, majestic. 
The further we are.


I'm reading Winter.
I’m done with summer and fall.
What happened to spring?


We are both crying,
Sad and gloomy, sky and I.
Our eyes are so wet.


5/4/18 Haloo

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Johnson Vdev November 27, 2019 at 10:14 PM You write very well..each one has a beauty ... I am enthralled Like a butterfly Hovering over bloom

Robert Lindley March 30, 2019 at 6:38 AM I especially love this wonderful marching procession of haiku.... A fav my friend... Pashang Salehi March 31, 2019 at 1:47 AM Thank you Robert, you're so kind.

Ovidiu Bocsa December 3, 2018 at 11:24 AM Amazing, subtle and shining. Human soul and nature in harmony. It may be true that not mind or heart (intelligence and feelings) lead us, but our habits. The second nature could be our good or well habits. Also as a kind of angels: personal habits. Pashang Salehi December 3, 2018 at 6:31 PM You are too kind Bumblebee...

Mahtab Bangalee September 27, 2018 at 12:53 AM excellent mystic and metaphysical Haiku. Pashang Salehi September 27, 2018 at 1:00 AM Thank you moonlight.

Vladislav Raven August 13, 2018 at 10:52 AM Hi Pashang, your Haiku show your poetic skill. Each one does sing into my mind and create such strong imagery. This string of Haiku go into my faves. Wonderful work my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX Pashang Salehi August 13, 2018 at 11:05 AM Thanks Mike, you are so kind.

Charlie Smith August 12, 2018 at 10:31 AM You very creatively displayed your skills my dear, well done... Pashang Salehi August 12, 2018 at 10:11 PM Thank you Charlie...

Pandita Sietesantos July 12, 2018 at 1:52 PM This string of haiku is a great reflection of your wonderful talent. Well done! Hugs. Pandita Pashang Salehi July 13, 2018 at 5:26 PM Thanks, Pandita... did you that our initials are the same... PS

Arthur Vaso June 1, 2018 at 1:35 AM Beautiful, I am a fan also of Persian poetry!!! Pashang Salehi June 1, 2018 at 1:25 PM Thank you, Arthur...

Joseph May May 12, 2018 at 9:14 AM Very creative haiku...Nicely done.. Pashang Salehi May 17, 2018 at 1:48 PM Thank you ...

Winged Warrior May 12, 2018 at 7:44 AM Very well crafted my friend...you must be haiku'd out lol...love and light...^WW^ Pashang Salehi May 17, 2018 at 1:47 PM Kind of.... LOL

Jean Murray May 9, 2018 at 11:39 AM Your muse is certainly not buried Pashang. Pashang Salehi May 10, 2018 at 2:32 AM ... but it is dusty... Thanks Jean..

Ravi Sathasivam May 9, 2018 at 5:49 AM Excellent haiku, cleverly written. Thanks for sharing it. Pashang Salehi May 10, 2018 at 2:31 AM Thanks Ravi...

Besma Riabi Dziri May 8, 2018 at 6:47 PM A clever write! An adept pen! A talented poet! A pleasure to read your write. Stay bright and blessed. Pashang Salehi May 8, 2018 at 6:57 PM thank you my dear..

Mystic Rose Rose May 8, 2018 at 6:41 AM Ah, this is an awesome string of haiku's , one more interesting then the other, Well done Pashang, thank you for sharing, have a great day Pashang Salehi May 8, 2018 at 6:55 PM My new friend Pixie, thank you my dear...

Eve Roper May 7, 2018 at 11:47 PM Victor and Paul are right the poems so we'll said and each one takes time to desern Pashang Salehi May 8, 2018 at 6:55 PM Eve you are too kind...

Paul Callus May 7, 2018 at 10:10 AM An excellent offering, Pashang. You show a keen eye for creativity. These points you brought up deserve at least some moments of meditation. Regards // paul Pashang Salehi May 7, 2018 at 10:42 AM Thanks Paul... Indeed..

Maria Williams May 6, 2018 at 7:26 AM What a great string of Haiku Pashang. Each set is interestingly intense, "life's lessons" in each. As you know I love this form of Poetry, and yours was a real treat to read......Maria hugs:) Pashang Salehi May 7, 2018 at 10:41 AM It was just for you....

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2018 at 7:55 PM I really enjoyed these, Pashang. They show different emotions. LIke Jan, I also really liked the one about reading winter and the last line of last one: our eyes are so wet. Pashang Salehi May 8, 2018 at 6:58 PM Thank you Andrea...

Jan Allison May 4, 2018 at 4:49 PM what a fabulous string of poems Pashang. i particularly liked 'I'm reading winter. I’m done with summer and fall. What happened to spring?' and 'Who is lonelier? An eagle or a vulture When there is no food.'. Thanks for sharing your wonderful words:-) hugs jan xx Pashang Salehi May 5, 2018 at 2:50 AM Thanks Jan... we are both Eagles and the vultures...

Vijay Pandit May 4, 2018 at 2:45 PM So many life lessons in such few words, Pashang! True words of wisdom!! Pashang Salehi May 5, 2018 at 2:49 AM Thanks Vijay... I solved so many problems for everybody, but I'm lost on my own....

Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2018 at 2:02 PM - A wonderful series of haiku, Pashang - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Pashang Salehi May 5, 2018 at 2:46 AM Thank you Anne Lise... you're too kind.