Pashang Salehi Poet Haiku

Persian Haiku 2

Persian Haiku 2

What a gorgeous view!
You and the flower garden,
I'm the butterfly.


Your eyes, the ocean;
The ocean colors your eyes.
Your hair is the wave.

Moon on the ocean, 
Your face is the reflection.
Always be alone.

I live with my heart,
All flowers are beautiful,
I love daffodils.

What a discussion,
I had with all my flowers.
Their breath smells nice.


3/20/2018 Haloo

Note: Iranians/Persians Celebrate today, the first day of spring as their new year. We call this day Norooz or Nowruz, it translates as New Day. From my family to yours,  Norooz Mobarak ....Happy New Year.

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Frank Sheehan January 15, 2019 at 3:09 PM Wonderful Haiku. Very creative and inspirational. Great pen. Pashang Salehi January 15, 2019 at 10:45 PM thanks...

Vladislav Raven October 28, 2018 at 10:07 AM Hi Pashang, another wonderful group of Persian Haiku. You put so much imagery into each one. I love the content of each one. Each one can stand alone as well as in a group. They go into my haiku faves Pashang. You paint such wonderful pictures with words. have a wonderful sunday. your friend always....Mike. Pashang Salehi November 5, 2018 at 2:48 AM You are too kind my friend.

Mahtab Bangalee September 27, 2018 at 12:57 AM outstanding and excellent - wow Pashang Salehi September 27, 2018 at 1:01 AM Thanks...

Roy Pett April 23, 2018 at 3:43 AM Hi Pashang, the Persian Haiku is new to me and found this really interesting it doesn’t seem to have the strick constraints of the Japanese form which is pleasing, thoroughly enjoyed reading your well written haikus, happy new year. :)) Pashang Salehi April 24, 2018 at 2:14 AM Thank you..

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2018 at 6:43 PM what a delightful custom you so beautifully describe here, Pashang. Pashang Salehi April 5, 2018 at 7:58 PM Thank you Andrea..

Gary Bateman March 30, 2018 at 5:03 AM Hello Pashang, Extraordinary and very descriptive writing all the way through with Persian Haiku 2. Very well-done, and full of wondrous metaphors!! A definite treat to read and to think about!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary Pashang Salehi April 5, 2018 at 7:57 PM Thank you Gary..

Joe Maverick March 26, 2018 at 12:07 AM Very alive write Pashang, so rich in description and metaphor.' Good reading for me today..) Pashang Salehi March 26, 2018 at 1:21 AM Thanks Joe... You're so kind...

Charlie Smith March 25, 2018 at 10:27 AM Happy New Year to you Pashang, great string of Haikus.. Pashang Salehi March 26, 2018 at 1:20 AM Thank you Charlie Norooz mobarak....

Paul Callus March 23, 2018 at 12:04 PM All the very best for a 'new beginning', Pashang! Flowers can be alluring and seductive with their colours and fragrance, just like beautiful women. Regards // paul Pashang Salehi March 23, 2018 at 3:19 PM You are SO right Paul... Thanks for everything.

Mick Talbot March 23, 2018 at 8:16 AM An enjoyable read! Many, many thanks for taking timeout to read my haiku, appreciated... Best wishes, Mick Pashang Salehi March 23, 2018 at 11:56 AM Thanks... Ditto

Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2018 at 6:07 AM - All is a welcome to spring ... I enjoy the whole stretch ... beautifully done, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Pashang Salehi March 23, 2018 at 11:55 AM Indeed... Thanks Anne-Lise

Maria Williams March 23, 2018 at 1:40 AM Oh wonderful Pashang a garland of Haiku, so fitting for the welcome to Spring, Happy New day to you my friend....Maria Pashang Salehi March 23, 2018 at 11:54 AM Thank you my dear Maria...

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2018 at 8:18 PM this is so sweet, Pashang, a conversation with spring's flowers. Welcome welcome, spring's dawning! Pashang Salehi March 23, 2018 at 1:33 AM Thanks Andrea.... You're so sweet.... Happy new year.

Vijay Pandit March 22, 2018 at 6:34 PM Norooz Mubarak Parshang! I hope I said it right. Lovely poem friend.. well written as always. Pashang Salehi March 23, 2018 at 1:32 AM You said it perfectly, thank you..... Norooz mubarak to you and your family...

Jan Allison March 22, 2018 at 6:20 PM What an exquisite string of haiku Pashang and i was correct the first one contains a butterfly. Happy New year am adding these gems to my faves:-) hugs jan x Pashang Salehi March 23, 2018 at 1:30 AM Happy new year my dear...

Akkina Downing March 21, 2018 at 8:57 PM Oh so lovely and beautiful Pashang.. I love it! Happy New Day to you... Hugs :) Pashang Salehi March 22, 2018 at 1:05 PM OH, you are so kind my dear...I thought I should concentrate on the season of creation, rather than creation itself.. :-)

Line Gauthier March 20, 2018 at 2:06 PM Lovely, Pashang. Pashang Salehi March 21, 2018 at 1:03 AM Thank you Line....

Probir Gupta March 20, 2018 at 10:37 AM wonderful discussion ... wonderful colours of imagination too ... Pashang Salehi March 21, 2018 at 1:03 AM Thank you my friend, you're always very kind to me... I wanted to write on a simpler tune....

Silent One March 20, 2018 at 6:24 AM Cultural haiku, thank your the info.. Pashang Salehi March 21, 2018 at 1:01 AM Thank you my friend for the visit.