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Persian Haiku 2

           Persian Haiku 2

What a gorgeous view?
You and the flower garden,
I'm the butterfly.

I’m drunk with love,
Some are red and some are white.
I love all colors.

The sky is so blue.
You’re my rainbow through and through.
Oh dear, I love you.


Your eyes, the ocean;
The ocean, colors your eyes.
Your hair is the wave.

Moon on the ocean, 
Your face is the reflection.
Always be alone.

I live with my heart,
All flowers are beautiful,
I love daffodils.

What a discussion,
I had with all my flowers.
Their breath smells nice.

3/20/2018 Haloo

Note: Iranians/Persians Celebrate today, the first day of spring as their new year. We call this day Norooz or Nowruz, it translates as New Day. From my family to yours,  Norooz Mobarak ....Happy New Year.

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Date: 1/15/2019 3:09:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku. Very creative and inspirational. Great pen.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/15/2019 10:45:00 PM
thanks...
Date: 10/28/2018 10:07:00 AM
Hi Pashang, another wonderful group of Persian Haiku. You put so much imagery into each one. I love the content of each one. Each one can stand alone as well as in a group. They go into my haiku faves Pashang. You paint such wonderful pictures with words. have a wonderful sunday. your friend always....Mike.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/5/2018 2:48:00 AM
You are too kind my friend.
Date: 9/27/2018 12:57:00 AM
outstanding and excellent - wow
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/27/2018 1:01:00 AM
Thanks...
Date: 4/23/2018 3:43:00 AM
Hi Pashang, the Persian Haiku is new to me and found this really interesting it doesn’t seem to have the strick constraints of the Japanese form which is pleasing, thoroughly enjoyed reading your well written haikus, happy new year. :))
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/24/2018 2:14:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 4/4/2018 6:43:00 PM
what a delightful custom you so beautifully describe here, Pashang.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/5/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Date: 3/30/2018 5:03:00 AM
Hello Pashang, Extraordinary and very descriptive writing all the way through with Persian Haiku 2. Very well-done, and full of wondrous metaphors!! A definite treat to read and to think about!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/5/2018 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Gary..
Date: 3/26/2018 12:07:00 AM
Very alive write Pashang, so rich in description and metaphor.' Good reading for me today..)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/26/2018 1:21:00 AM
Thanks Joe... You're so kind...
Date: 3/25/2018 10:27:00 AM
Happy New Year to you Pashang, great string of Haikus..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/26/2018 1:20:00 AM
Thank you Charlie Norooz mobarak....
Date: 3/23/2018 12:04:00 PM
All the very best for a 'new beginning', Pashang! Flowers can be alluring and seductive with their colours and fragrance, just like beautiful women. Regards // paul
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 3:19:00 PM
You are SO right Paul... Thanks for everything.
Date: 3/23/2018 8:16:00 AM
An enjoyable read! Many, many thanks for taking timeout to read my haiku, appreciated... Best wishes, Mick
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 11:56:00 AM
Thanks... Ditto
Date: 3/23/2018 6:07:00 AM
- All is a welcome to spring ... I enjoy the whole stretch ... beautifully done, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 11:55:00 AM
Indeed... Thanks Anne-Lise
Date: 3/23/2018 1:40:00 AM
Oh wonderful Pashang a garland of Haiku, so fitting for the welcome to Spring, Happy New day to you my friend....Maria
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 11:54:00 AM
Thank you my dear Maria...
Date: 3/22/2018 8:18:00 PM
this is so sweet, Pashang, a conversation with spring's flowers. Welcome welcome, spring's dawning!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 1:33:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.... You're so sweet.... Happy new year.
Date: 3/22/2018 6:34:00 PM
Norooz Mubarak Parshang! I hope I said it right. Lovely poem friend.. well written as always.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 1:32:00 AM
You said it perfectly, thank you..... Norooz mubarak to you and your family...
Date: 3/22/2018 6:20:00 PM
What an exquisite string of haiku Pashang and i was correct the first one contains a butterfly. Happy New year am adding these gems to my faves:-) hugs jan x
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 1:30:00 AM
Happy new year my dear...
Date: 3/21/2018 8:57:00 PM
Oh so lovely and beautiful Pashang.. I love it! Happy New Day to you... Hugs :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/22/2018 1:05:00 PM
OH, you are so kind my dear...I thought I should concentrate on the season of creation, rather than creation itself.. :-)
Date: 3/20/2018 2:06:00 PM
Lovely, Pashang.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/21/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you Line....
Date: 3/20/2018 10:37:00 AM
wonderful discussion ... wonderful colours of imagination too ...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/21/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you my friend, you're always very kind to me... I wanted to write on a simpler tune....
Date: 3/20/2018 6:24:00 AM
Cultural haiku, thank your the info..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/21/2018 1:01:00 AM
Thank you my friend for the visit.