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Persian Haiku 2

Persian Haiku 2 What a gorgeous view! You and the flower garden, I'm the butterfly. Your eyes, the ocean; The ocean colors your eyes. Your hair is the wave. Moon on the ocean, Your face is the reflection. Always be alone. I live with my heart, All flowers are beautiful, I love daffodils. What a discussion, I had with all my flowers. Their breath smells nice. 3/20/2018 Haloo Note: Iranians/Persians Celebrate today, the first day of spring as their new year. We call this day Norooz or Nowruz, it translates as New Day. From my family to yours, Norooz Mobarak ....Happy New Year.

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Frank Sheehan

Date: 1/15/2019 3:09:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku. Very creative and inspirational. Great pen.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/15/2019 10:45:00 PM

thanks...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/28/2018 10:07:00 AM

Hi Pashang, another wonderful group of Persian Haiku. You put so much imagery into each one. I love the content of each one. Each one can stand alone as well as in a group. They go into my haiku faves Pashang. You paint such wonderful pictures with words. have a wonderful sunday. your friend always....Mike.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/5/2018 2:48:00 AM

You are too kind my friend.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/27/2018 12:57:00 AM

outstanding and excellent - wow

Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/27/2018 1:01:00 AM

Thanks...

Roy Pett

Date: 4/23/2018 3:43:00 AM

Hi Pashang, the Persian Haiku is new to me and found this really interesting it doesn’t seem to have the strick constraints of the Japanese form which is pleasing, thoroughly enjoyed reading your well written haikus, happy new year. :))

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/24/2018 2:14:00 AM

Thank you..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2018 6:43:00 PM

what a delightful custom you so beautifully describe here, Pashang.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/5/2018 7:58:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/30/2018 5:03:00 AM

Hello Pashang, Extraordinary and very descriptive writing all the way through with Persian Haiku 2. Very well-done, and full of wondrous metaphors!! A definite treat to read and to think about!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/5/2018 7:57:00 PM

Thank you Gary..

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/26/2018 12:07:00 AM

Very alive write Pashang, so rich in description and metaphor.' Good reading for me today..)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/26/2018 1:21:00 AM

Thanks Joe... You're so kind...

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/25/2018 10:27:00 AM

Happy New Year to you Pashang, great string of Haikus..

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/26/2018 1:20:00 AM

Thank you Charlie Norooz mobarak....

Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2018 12:04:00 PM

All the very best for a 'new beginning', Pashang! Flowers can be alluring and seductive with their colours and fragrance, just like beautiful women. Regards // paul

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 3:19:00 PM

You are SO right Paul... Thanks for everything.

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/23/2018 8:16:00 AM

An enjoyable read! Many, many thanks for taking timeout to read my haiku, appreciated... Best wishes, Mick

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 11:56:00 AM

Thanks... Ditto

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2018 6:07:00 AM

- All is a welcome to spring ... I enjoy the whole stretch ... beautifully done, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 11:55:00 AM

Indeed... Thanks Anne-Lise

Maria Williams

Date: 3/23/2018 1:40:00 AM

Oh wonderful Pashang a garland of Haiku, so fitting for the welcome to Spring, Happy New day to you my friend....Maria

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 11:54:00 AM

Thank you my dear Maria...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2018 8:18:00 PM

this is so sweet, Pashang, a conversation with spring's flowers. Welcome welcome, spring's dawning!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 1:33:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.... You're so sweet.... Happy new year.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/22/2018 6:34:00 PM

Norooz Mubarak Parshang! I hope I said it right. Lovely poem friend.. well written as always.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 1:32:00 AM

You said it perfectly, thank you..... Norooz mubarak to you and your family...

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2018 6:20:00 PM

What an exquisite string of haiku Pashang and i was correct the first one contains a butterfly. Happy New year am adding these gems to my faves:-) hugs jan x

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/23/2018 1:30:00 AM

Happy new year my dear...