Perpetual Love

If you want your love to last forever
turn around midway and walk away
to go back in time and frequently savor;
Let the flame of love in you eternally burn
and let the longing perpetually churn,
Wherefore to pine and surfeit day by day
and keep the lure of love unfathomable ever.

Pluck and cherish a flower in its bloom
and let it go as the northern winds blow,
holding it too close then ought to doom.
To stay young and be loved forever
that time and distance never can sever...
then pay heed—how it ought to go
like retracting steps from a hushed room.



~Posted: 8/29/18
~For a Michelle Faulkner's contest

~Rhyme Time 6 contest by Laura Loo
~Theme: Perpetual love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Congrats on your win, Abdul.
Faulkner Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 2:58 PM
This doesn't go how I thought, but I'm glad it surprised me, love the ending lines, thanks for submitting it to my contest!
Scars Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 7:03 AM
beautifully expressed poem on perpetual love and its glory...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
Dutta Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 11:10 PM
i like the first two lines most. All the best.
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