Perpetual Darkness

Running after a life of carnal pleasures condemns one's soul into perpetual darkness!







(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
   29 September 2016

lightmenpassionmonoku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Anu Nayak

September 29, 2016 at 2:20 PM

My Dear Wise Man Demetrios, 100% agreed ! Sensory pleasures are ephemeral and hollow and are a big hurdle in the path of eternal bliss.....this is what I feel....Well, Your poems make me think....a 7! for this beauty:) Your roof garden is colourful, love, Anu:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 29, 2016 at 3:00 PM

Thank you so very much dearest, Anu, for your lovely comments and for your generosity! I do appreciate your visits!

Alexis Y.

September 29, 2016 at 9:30 AM

Hi Demetrios, Your monoku's are filled with great wisdom. I must say that I agree my wise friend. A Big seven: -) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 29, 2016 at 12:18 PM

You too kind and generous my dear, Alexis. Thank you so much!

Richard Lamoureux

September 29, 2016 at 9:01 AM

I wonder why it holds such allure? Your writing causes one to ponder.

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 29, 2016 at 12:21 PM

My good friend, Richard, my goal is to pass a message of a different kind that people today do not listen to. How successful I am you, the poets, are going to tell me. Thank you!