Perpetual Darkness

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PERPETUAL DARKNESS

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

Running after a life of carnal pleasures condemns one's soul into perpetual darkness!







(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
   29 September 2016

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Anu Nayak

Date: 9/29/2016 2:20:00 PM

My Dear Wise Man Demetrios, 100% agreed ! Sensory pleasures are ephemeral and hollow and are a big hurdle in the path of eternal bliss.....this is what I feel....Well, Your poems make me think....a 7! for this beauty:) Your roof garden is colourful, love, Anu:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2016 3:00:00 PM

Thank you so very much dearest, Anu, for your lovely comments and for your generosity! I do appreciate your visits!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/29/2016 9:30:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, Your monoku's are filled with great wisdom. I must say that I agree my wise friend. A Big seven: -) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2016 12:18:00 PM

You too kind and generous my dear, Alexis. Thank you so much!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2016 9:01:00 AM

I wonder why it holds such allure? Your writing causes one to ponder.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2016 12:21:00 PM

My good friend, Richard, my goal is to pass a message of a different kind that people today do not listen to. How successful I am you, the poets, are going to tell me. Thank you!