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Permissive Parent

embers of fire burst 
a conflict of the dragon
enforcing strict rules
helping maturing up brave
facing full heat of the sun


10/13/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lee Sr. Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Eve! only on thing Great. As it should be this way should have never change "Spare the rod spoil the child". Got to have balance, life's about NO's and Yes choices and decisions in disceiphene. Good write --James
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 6:04 PM
I had trouble trying to be stern. But my kids grew up ok. I guess between the two of us, my hubbie and I managed to do ok!! Nicely done, Eve.
Salehi Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 9:30 AM
God... how hot this is...
Sivey Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 2:05 AM
This write needs to be taught to all the parents in today's time period, the children are getting away with too much nowadays and they aren't respecting anyone...even their parents! This is a great implication of how children should be raised every day! What a special poem here my friend! Great Work!!
Vaso Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 8:37 PM
beautiful poem, when parents do this, children appreciate it very much later on!
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Well said, Eve--your poem depicts the scene in the picture beautifully!
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