Permissive Parent

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embers of fire burst a conflict of the dragon enforcing strict rules helping maturing up brave facing full heat of the sun 10/13/2017

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James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 10/31/2017 6:39:00 PM

Eve! only on thing Great. As it should be this way should have never change "Spare the rod spoil the child". Got to have balance, life's about NO's and Yes choices and decisions in disceiphene. Good write --James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2017 6:04:00 PM

I had trouble trying to be stern. But my kids grew up ok. I guess between the two of us, my hubbie and I managed to do ok!! Nicely done, Eve.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/14/2017 9:30:00 AM

God... how hot this is...

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/14/2017 2:05:00 AM

This write needs to be taught to all the parents in today's time period, the children are getting away with too much nowadays and they aren't respecting anyone...even their parents! This is a great implication of how children should be raised every day! What a special poem here my friend! Great Work!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/13/2017 8:37:00 PM

beautiful poem, when parents do this, children appreciate it very much later on!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/13/2017 6:24:00 PM

Well said, Eve--your poem depicts the scene in the picture beautifully!